The Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "A Wonderful Change in Me!"Subtitle: God Never Lets Go!
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Comment from GracieAnn
Sankey, this is such a clear view of the positive and negative persons' points of view. I appreciate your telling the reader of your challenge that you have not allowed to rule your life. God is good. Well done. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2014
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Sankey, this is such a clear view of the positive and negative persons' points of view. I appreciate your telling the reader of your challenge that you have not allowed to rule your life. God is good. Well done. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 24-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2014
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Thanks Sis I had not expectred so many wonderful reviews of this re-edited chapter of my life. I had to come back to this area as I had a boo boo on a nearby chapter about stuff that happened AFTER our marriage and I had it set BEFORE we were married. That entailed fixing some of the chapters around it as well. Thanks again and appreciate you coming by. As you may have read we are ever so much closer now to final full editing of the entire book and also a big total book review with rewards. Just getting all the photos ready as we all know only one photo per chapter here so the othes are all outside FS.
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Hullo again if you are stil around. I am about to reorganize this book again to add mopre pictures as I learned how to do that from assisting my wife with her Trip book she wrote and I edited and proof read etc over on Tootsie55. Keep an eye out if interested been a long time I know.
Comment from seaglass
So much was not known in medical science when we were young. And I have also seen do-gooder and self made counselors do a lot of damage. Post Partum depression was the hormone imbalance that made me think I'd lost my mind. The can not treat it easily. I saw no errors in your writing.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2014
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So much was not known in medical science when we were young. And I have also seen do-gooder and self made counselors do a lot of damage. Post Partum depression was the hormone imbalance that made me think I'd lost my mind. The can not treat it easily. I saw no errors in your writing.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2014
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I found Sister Henniger I think it was a lovely lady. I was glad they were already out of the habits and so on. In all fairness no matter how much Mum in law to be interfered before we were married on the day she behaved herself. Thanks for coming by I was not looking for reviews on this as it was a repair of a chapter. Also had to move some other stuff that was in the wrong place in another chapter. had it BEFORE we were married but it belonged AFTER we were married the other chapter I mean. We are almost ready for a big edit right through and big reviewof whole book with plenty of rewards. Selecting photos for the book outside FS seeing we are only allowed one pic per chapter in here. have a dear friend working on the cover drawing and all that too.
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Good luck with wrapping it up.
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Hi Sis here I am again....still working on things moving chapters and combining others and adding more pictures now I know how after Louise's trip book. Full book review after all this. Keep an eye out some more dialogue too, as someone requested a while back!
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You can never go wrong with adding dialog. It will give it extra life.
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Thanks Sis. Will work on it some more and let you know.
Comment from Jay Squires
Who's lookin' Happy? You both appear to be ecstatic. You have that "See what I got?" look on your face. And she IS a beaut!
I learned something. I didn't realize you were deaf.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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Who's lookin' Happy? You both appear to be ecstatic. You have that "See what I got?" look on your face. And she IS a beaut!
I learned something. I didn't realize you were deaf.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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Yeah and it is worse atm mate. Been coughing a lot lately so again deaf but different ot the pother deaf! Sigh! Gld you enjoyed was not looking for reviews as this was a re-arrange and clean up of another part that I motted before. Been seding out for a bit final review real soon buig edit before I do all the pictures off of FS for the book.
Cheers and thanks
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Hey Jay!! Played "My Kabeez" to myself again today. I* loved all these wonderful reviews I had through here. I wanted to let you know particularly as I think you were after me for MORE DIALOGUE hehe...that in the re-organization of this book once again there will be more dialogue and MORE PICTURES seeing I had such a great time on Louise's Trip book with all the photos bonded together. SO watch out more chapters being combined and more pictures and total book review as soon as I can.
Comment from judiverse
Very interesting, and written in your engaging style. Strange the reactions parents can have when their children announce they are getting married. Your wife's mother disapproved and your mother was pleased. Well, 50-50 is pretty good. You certainly got the Catholic influence with counseling from the nun and the priest who was willing to conduct the wedding ceremony. My niece married a Catholic, and their ceremony was in a Catholic church. The priest was terrible--even insisted on singing when the soloist was singing and was stern with groomsmen about no drinking before the ceremony. Interesting addition to this with description of your attempts to find treatment for your condition and finally getting the right one. judi
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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Very interesting, and written in your engaging style. Strange the reactions parents can have when their children announce they are getting married. Your wife's mother disapproved and your mother was pleased. Well, 50-50 is pretty good. You certainly got the Catholic influence with counseling from the nun and the priest who was willing to conduct the wedding ceremony. My niece married a Catholic, and their ceremony was in a Catholic church. The priest was terrible--even insisted on singing when the soloist was singing and was stern with groomsmen about no drinking before the ceremony. Interesting addition to this with description of your attempts to find treatment for your condition and finally getting the right one. judi
Comment Written 23-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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Yeah but what does the priest do in the mass when no one else is drinkjing ha! And it aiin't grape juice. Thanks did not set out for reviews this time it was a tidy up of that chapter and another one I ommitted stuff from. Big erdit and whole book review rewards coming soon then pictures to select off of FS for the book. We are gettiung very close now.
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Hey Judi the old Autobiography is still getting worked on now for some combining of chapters and addition of pictures in here seeing we had such a great time with Louise's Trip book. So if you didn't get any points before hang around as the full book review is coming as soon as possible. Even some dialogue added as some were asking for.
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You're welcome. Congratulations on putting your book together. judi
Comment from Ben Colder
Are you literally deaf? This is good, Bro. So typical of mothers who wish not to see their offspring fly the coop.
Bring on the write I will try and catch it when I get back. Blessings to you. Ran out of 6 or would be yoours.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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Are you literally deaf? This is good, Bro. So typical of mothers who wish not to see their offspring fly the coop.
Bring on the write I will try and catch it when I get back. Blessings to you. Ran out of 6 or would be yoours.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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Awww thanks mate had not set out for reviews this time as just doing a tidy up of a previous chapter I left stuff out of. Big Edit coming on and big whole book review with rewards real soon then selection of pictures for the Published edition.
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Bro ben this old dinosaur autobiography is still being worked on. Combining some chapters adding some dialogue as some have requested and more pictures now I know how to do it better. Hang around for a full book review in a while.
Comment from c_lucas
Mother in Laws are a necessary evil to have conflict in your wedding plans. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very strong read.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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Mother in Laws are a necessary evil to have conflict in your wedding plans. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very strong read.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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Yeah bro she wanbted some artist to sing at the wedding some sort of pop song we did Psalm 27 The Lord is my light' as you would have seen I was not looking for reviews on this as it was a tu7dy up of this and one other chapter I ommitted stuff from before but thanks anyway Big whole book edit coming and rewards for reviews in final soon.
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Good Luck in your endeavors, Geoff. Charles.
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Bro Charlie are you still in FS? I was not sure. Had such a good time adding all the pictures and stuff to my wife's trip stories I decided to add more pictures over here also some more dialogue as folks asked for and combining some chapters...full book review after all that hope you can hang around if you are up to it. Hope you are doing better health wise. Lord Bless.
Comment from CR Delport
Why do mother's always interfere in their children's lives. I mean, I never tell my son what to do. But if he marries that floozy, I'll never talk to him again :) Just kidding :D This is another interesting installment.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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Why do mother's always interfere in their children's lives. I mean, I never tell my son what to do. But if he marries that floozy, I'll never talk to him again :) Just kidding :D This is another interesting installment.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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Thanks mate appreciate you coming by had not intended reviews on this one hence no rewards it was a clean up of this and the previous chapter where I ommitted stuff before. Big Edit comong then big open whole book review with rewards then picking out photos fo rthe published edition off of FS. Thanks again.
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Hi Christelle, coming to you out of the cobwebs of my book hehe. I read through some of the wonderful reviews through here and letteing folks know we are still working on stuff preparing for a full book review soon. Adding more dialogue as some asked for and more pictures now I know how to do it after Louise's trip book. Combining some chapters as well. Keep watching for the full book review in a little while if you have the time.
Comment from michaelcahill
Hey, you managed to get a new part in there somehow. Great addition. I think a lot of people have similar stories. Funny how they get up in arms over two full grown intelligent adults and their decisions. Hahaha. I love the priest jumping on board right away. Don't know how you managed this, it's just chapter twenty. Well, good for you! mikey
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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Hey, you managed to get a new part in there somehow. Great addition. I think a lot of people have similar stories. Funny how they get up in arms over two full grown intelligent adults and their decisions. Hahaha. I love the priest jumping on board right away. Don't know how you managed this, it's just chapter twenty. Well, good for you! mikey
Comment Written 23-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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I moved others around to make room for it. I did not seek reviews but the freebee came up you and the other old bro Roy Owens got the 2 free ones. I had to correct some blaring errors in sequence and order as to some things that happened AFTER we were married but were appearing BEFORE we were hitched. Thanks mate!
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Hey old mate. More work on my Autobiography in progress. More dialogue as some asked for , more pictures now I mastered it on Louise's trip book. Hope you have time for the full book review coming eventually.
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Great to hear from you!
Been running around all day to emergency rooms etc. All's well at the end of the day. Exhausting though. Can't wait to see it. I'll carve out some time one way or another. I'm hardly here except like a little mouse in the wee hours sneaking about. :)) mikey
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Good to hear mate. Regs to Donna and the residents.
Comment from royowen
I loved this short testimony of your love for your wife, at the time your fiancé, I have been deeply moved by your life testimony Geoff, it has certainly been a testament to God's goodness and mercy! Well done blessings, Roy.
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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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I loved this short testimony of your love for your wife, at the time your fiancé, I have been deeply moved by your life testimony Geoff, it has certainly been a testament to God's goodness and mercy! Well done blessings, Roy.
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Comment Written 23-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2014
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Thanks Bro you are coming in just as I have finalised the script for my book. Only a major edit and open up for book wide review and setting up the (lots more than on here) pictures outside the FS Web site for the book remains. There are in total 34 chapters and I don't envisage adding anymore now I have done an almost final tidy up of sequence etc.
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Look forward bro, Roy.
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So good to have a bro in the Lord as a supporter in here mate you have no idea what it means. Big edit and review coming before I get the pictures sorted for the published edition.
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Hey bruv....here I am again! Loved your encouragement in FS all over the place. A fellow Aussie puts the cap on it too hehe. I am STILL working on this book. Combining some chapters and adding more pictures seeing we did have such a wonderful time of it over on Louise's trip book. Adding some dialogue as some asked for as well. hang around, bro! God Bless.
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Most welcome and looking forward
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Thanks bro let you know.
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Well done.
