Bound firmly.
A young woman finds violence in the woods.23 total reviews
Comment from mikemagine
Walt Disney would not approve of this! Shame! Shame! Kidding:) Actually, this is very clever and yes...! Scary:-o! You pulled it off, I'd say...100 wds.
Mike
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Walt Disney would not approve of this! Shame! Shame! Kidding:) Actually, this is very clever and yes...! Scary:-o! You pulled it off, I'd say...100 wds.
Mike
Comment Written 21-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Thank you Mike for now inspiring me to write a Walt Disney horror LOL! TERROR WITHIN THE SEVEN DWARFS!!! I always enjoy your review for sure, thank you for the excellent stars.
God bless!
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Lol! And you're always fun to rev., NeoNewman!
Peace in abundance!
Mike
Comment from Charlene0513
To Neonewman,
Good setting and description of your subject.
Total submersion into the movie displays your act of a dubious creature before you.
Charlene
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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To Neonewman,
Good setting and description of your subject.
Total submersion into the movie displays your act of a dubious creature before you.
Charlene
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Thank you Charlene for another awesome review. God Bless!
Comment from PatVallesMangan
Wow! That clown picture had this clown phobics heart beating fast ;) You certainly work well in this genre! This could also work in so many other horror genres but relaying so much in so few words is a talent. And once again that picture choice was 'spot on!" Good Luck in the contest! ~ Pat
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Wow! That clown picture had this clown phobics heart beating fast ;) You certainly work well in this genre! This could also work in so many other horror genres but relaying so much in so few words is a talent. And once again that picture choice was 'spot on!" Good Luck in the contest! ~ Pat
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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thank you Pat for the awesome review and stars. I also have a phobia with clowns due to the movie IT!
God Bless!
Comment from padumachitta
Hi. Well you had me going you certainly did. Good entry for this Personally it is popcorn that does me in...and being chaed by cadilacs, with a huge dog in the passenger seat...yup I read mr king too...
padumachitta
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Hi. Well you had me going you certainly did. Good entry for this Personally it is popcorn that does me in...and being chaed by cadilacs, with a huge dog in the passenger seat...yup I read mr king too...
padumachitta
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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I do love to read King's books and stories. Thank you for another awesome review padumachitta.
God Bless!
Comment from amahra
What a terrifying art work you chose for this writing. I loved the way you start off with such horror only to find its a Stephen King movie and ice cream. I don't think it was the ice cream at bedtime but Stephen King at bedtime. Smile.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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What a terrifying art work you chose for this writing. I loved the way you start off with such horror only to find its a Stephen King movie and ice cream. I don't think it was the ice cream at bedtime but Stephen King at bedtime. Smile.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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Thank you for another awesome review amahra, yes it was definitely the Stephen King movie lol.
God Bless!
Comment from Louise Michelle
You followed all the requirements for this writing challenge. Good details which provoked really gruesome images. Surprise ending made me smile. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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You followed all the requirements for this writing challenge. Good details which provoked really gruesome images. Surprise ending made me smile. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 19-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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Thank you Louise. God Bless!
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this story about the nightmare that was caused from too much ice cream and a horror movie night, lol. I enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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this is an excellent write, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this story about the nightmare that was caused from too much ice cream and a horror movie night, lol. I enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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Thank you again sweetwoodjax for another awesome review. God Bless!
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I love the story. So you blamed the dream on ice cream. I am sure the Stephen King movie had nothing to do with it. Just the Stephen King movie would freak me out. I do not watch him in the day time, let allow night. He is now King of the thrillers. Great work.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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I love the picture. I love the story. So you blamed the dream on ice cream. I am sure the Stephen King movie had nothing to do with it. Just the Stephen King movie would freak me out. I do not watch him in the day time, let allow night. He is now King of the thrillers. Great work.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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Thank you nelliesellie for the excellent review. God bless!
Comment from Judy Couch
Your story started well. It has no grammatical errors. However, the subject of waking to find it was only a dream has been done so many times. It would be a good horror story if it had a different ending.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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Your story started well. It has no grammatical errors. However, the subject of waking to find it was only a dream has been done so many times. It would be a good horror story if it had a different ending.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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thank you Judy for the excellent review and the feedback is what I am looking for on my journey. I have had many of the same responses about the dream thing. This is how I grow and look forward to my future improvements. God Bless!
Comment from mauial
Good job in telling a complete short story within 100 words.Your ending also fits the bill for a flash fiction, a total surprise.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014
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Good job in telling a complete short story within 100 words.Your ending also fits the bill for a flash fiction, a total surprise.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014
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Thank you Mauial for the excellent review and stars. God Bless!