Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Stunning presentation of your short poem
dramatic use of personification
strong high-impact verb choices that add to the high intensity drama
a powerful visual with strong appeal to other senses as well as I hear the wind and the waves and feel the sting of the sea
Brooke

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2014

Comment from Darkhorse555

Excellent

just as i am reading this smiling in the middle of a storm here ourselves in ireland very beautifully painted picture excellent pen

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2014

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

it's a good idea just to leave...water can be very powerful...it can kill...very well said...and very well written...perfect picture...

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014

Thanks so much for reading and responding. I appreciate your comments.

reply by l.raven on 17-Oct-2014

you are so very welcome...xxoo

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Raging dark sea
advances angrily,
threatens--
I retreat

This is a great short poem for the contest - good luck in it.

Teresa

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014

Thanks for reading and responding.

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

You meet the contest requirements wonderfully in this well penned piece. Your imagery is vivid and powerful given the number of words allotted. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014

Thanks so much for your comments and for reviewing.