Comment from l.raven

Excellent

LOrd I hope so...and I hope it is soon...love your wording...and the meaning is this poem...very well written...and the perfect picture...

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014

thanks for reviewing.

reply by l.raven on 18-Oct-2014

you are so welcome...xxoo

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This meets the contest requirements nicely. You deliver a very thought provoking piece that is an excellent goal to aspire to. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014

Thanks for reviewing.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, mystery writer, a unique picture. is this about creating living environments in space? I wish you the best ofl uck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014

thanks for reviewing.

Comment from drivenbackward

Excellent

You certainly got me thinking:

That would be interesting. The only way for this to be possible would be to design a technological weapon that can rid the earth of those committing evil sins as well as those with the potential to commit evil sins. A weapon that leaves no evidence or harm to the environment. Then, start again. Or, we can just leave them all on earth without the help of civilized nations. See how that works out for them.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014

sounds like a good idea to me. Thanks for reviewing.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

I have envisioned a different goal...if we aim for riches greed pays a toll.
If we aim for love and harmony and a God center we will be blessed with rich global communities...
God bless

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014

Thanks for reviewing.

Comment from mfowler

Excellent

I like this bold idea very much. History is a litany of failed attempts of humans to shake our savage past and become a cooperative civilized world, but we are far too tribal and ego bound to get past our differences. Your wisdom surpasses the present possibilities and should remain our goal forever. It's our best hope for not destroying ourselves. Your short poem says so much. Good Luck.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014

Thanks for the awesome review. You hit on it the big three letter word ego.

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

This is a very positive short poem, it has the sentiments that most moral and right thinking people would agree,

I wish you the best of luck in the contest
Mary

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014

thank you for reviewing.

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

Wonderful sentiments very well expressed in excellent presentation.

If only...until Man loses all selfishness, greed and wish for power, this will never happen. Part of Man's makeup is to strive for something better, and even without wishing to harm others in the process, this often results in exploitation and casualties.

Nice one.

Cheers, Ray

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014

Nicely stated. Thanks for reviewing.

Comment from Eigle Rull

Excellent

This is very well written, considering the limitations of the contest. It has a subject all of us are interested in. It explains what is needed and what will hopefully come from the present time, which is still the beginning. I enjoyed reading it and the picture was great.

Always with respect,

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014

thanks for the awesome review.