Comment from lakeport

Excellent

sweet pineapple,indeed that is a delicious fruit, a lovely Haiku poem. Good luck at the contest, God bless you, Hugs! lakeport....

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014

Thank you so much, :-)

reply by lakeport on 18-Oct-2014

you are welcome.Hugs!lakeport.

Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

Pineapple is delicious. We have a tenancy of forgetting that we bought it and it goes bad but when we do have it's super good. Great job and good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014

Thanks for this great review. Have you ever grilled it. We love it. :-)

Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

good luck in the contest

your syllable count within contest guidelines

your few words portray the Thai delight in pineapple

you need to fix your title you have missed a ) at the end of the sentence a typo error

hope you do this before the contest votes otherwise you will be disqualified

cheers Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014

Thanks so very much, I fixed it. And a double thank you for the good review and encouragement.

reply by Smoothiecool on 18-Oct-2014

most welcome ...SC

Comment from Charlene0513

Excellent

A delicious fruit that can be used for so many things aside from tasting it pure; it also is good on pizza's, used in jams and jello's.
Charlene

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014

And have you ever had it grilled. Yummy, thanks for this great review.

Comment from Curly Girly

Exceptional

This is really quite clever. Pineapple -- yes, a strange name that can conjure up many possibilities to a person who is new to the English language.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014

Thanks for reading and for the fabulous array of stars. :-)

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

I happen to love pineapple. It's always been one of my favorite fruits. When mixed with bananas, it as good as any candy out there, and a heck-of-a-lot better for you, too!

A well written haiku, and a Thai treat it is indeed.

Best of luck to you in the contest. :}

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014

Thanks Dean as always for the wonderful review. :-)

reply by Dean Kuch on 18-Oct-2014

You're very welcome. :}

Comment from AnnieGale

Excellent

Certainly says it all in this sweet poem. Love the artwork also, allows one to visualize and smell the scent of the sweet pineapple. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014

Thanks for the comments and good luck wishes

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

great pairing of photo and poem
I like the humorous commentary on the actual name of the pineapple and how misleading it can be :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014

Thanks Brooke for the review, I am glad you enjoyed it

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, mystery writer, I enjoyed reading this haiku poem about the taste of sweetness, I can't eat it though because one tiny piece will give me an asthma attack. good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014

Sorry about the asthma, pineapple is not much to give up if that helps to keep you well. Thank you for the great review and good wishes.

Comment from Val Crisson

Excellent

Very clever and original take on this prompt. I love pineapple so you had me from the "get go" Satori line is strong and brings in a very Asian flare. Good luck

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014

Thanks for the great review, love pineapple grilled, have you tried that. Yummy!