Jellyfish
Amazing creatures in the deepest part of the sea4 total reviews
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
You meet the contest requirements well. This has lovely imagery and a more poetic focus than most entered in this contest - but you have it posted as prose and not poetry. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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You meet the contest requirements well. This has lovely imagery and a more poetic focus than most entered in this contest - but you have it posted as prose and not poetry. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Good job. I like your picture. You did the same thing I did several days ago. I was in a hurry and did not pay close enough attention to all the little boxes on the writing page. I had my poem listed as General Fiction instead of Poetry. It does make a difference. Send Tom a message, and he will 'fix it' I could not fix it myself. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Good job. I like your picture. You did the same thing I did several days ago. I was in a hurry and did not pay close enough attention to all the little boxes on the writing page. I had my poem listed as General Fiction instead of Poetry. It does make a difference. Send Tom a message, and he will 'fix it' I could not fix it myself. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Nosha17
You have captured the essence and beauty of the jellyfish well in your poem. I wouldn't like to be stung by one, though. Good complimentary picture and good luck in the contest. Faye
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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You have captured the essence and beauty of the jellyfish well in your poem. I wouldn't like to be stung by one, though. Good complimentary picture and good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thank you
Comment from onebrit
Jelly fish are amazing, interesting creatures that existing the periphery of our knowing.....my daughter was stung by one, it caused her no end of problems. Picture is lovely.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Jelly fish are amazing, interesting creatures that existing the periphery of our knowing.....my daughter was stung by one, it caused her no end of problems. Picture is lovely.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thank you