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Viewing comments for Chapter 116 "Renoir"
'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway

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Comment from lakeport
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Renoir,indeed he was a great Painter, that's a very nice expressed 2/4/2 poem, good luck at the contest, God bless you,Hugs!lakeport.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
    The contest is long over, but your review has made me feel like a winner. Thank you so very much for reading. :-) Carolyn
reply by lakeport on 07-Oct-2014
    your welcome.Hugs!lakeport,
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Pierre-Auguste Renoir was the last of the Impressionists to be drawn into printmaking, turning to the medium when he was almost fifty years old. Though he was extremely skilled as an etcher and lithographer, he spent the majority of his career establishing himself as a painter. One of my personal favorites of his is "Le Chapeau Epingle", or "Hat Pin", done around 1824, I think.

Anyhow, well done, and best of luck to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
    Hi dear Dean, Although Renoir was not born until 1841 and died in 1912 or 19 I think, I agree that I love his later work as an impressionist. He and Claude Monet were good friends and painted together often. Can you imagine what a session that would have been. Thank you for your wonderful comments as usual. :-)
reply by Dean Kuch on 01-Oct-2014
    Oh boy, that sure would have been a doozy, LOL!

    It was my pleasure, and you're very welcome, anon. :}
Comment from Smoothiecool
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good luck in the contest

your syllable count spot on

what can one say in so few syllables

you portray your message well

good visual

cheers smoothiecool

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
    Thanks smoothiecool, for such a wonderful review
reply by Smoothiecool on 01-Oct-2014
    so welcome
    have a blessed day ..SC >.Faye
Comment from seaglass
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I love the Impressionist period and Renoir is one of my favorite. This short poem contest is a nice tribute to him. The picture presents it very well.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
    Thanks as always for reading
Comment from Acquired Taste
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Gorgeous artwork choice - your words are perfect for the offering. Am always amazed when so few words tell an entire story. My best wishes for luck in this contest. AT=

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
    Thank you, it is a challenge to say what you want in 8 syllables. I appreciate your review. :-)
Comment from Rmocruz
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A fitting tribute to a phenomenal artist-love the portrait.
A worthy 2-4-2 entry in conformance to the writing prompt.
I must confess, I am not a fan of the brief writing formats.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
    Neither am I but I chose what I love. I thank you for relating also.
reply by Rmocruz on 30-Sep-2014
    You're welcome, my pleasure.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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You have met the contest requirements well with a spot on syllable count. This is an excellent approach to the prompt - inventive and refreshing. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
    Thank you so much for reading and the encouraging comments.
Comment from Nosha17
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I do like classical art, but never realised how beautiful it was, till I went to Florence and San Sepulchro in Italy and saw the Italian masters. You have captured the essence of your favourite artist in your poem. Well chosen words and great picture. Good luck in the contest. Faye

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
    Thanks Faye, when the contest is over I have a few more to post. He is, as you said, a master.
Comment from adewpearl
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good pairing of artwork and poem, which is in good 2/4/2 syllable count for this contest
I prefer people not use all caps when posting
the form is too short for you to say anything about this guy other than to identify him - so not much to say in a review
Brooke

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
    Thank you Brooke, as always, for reading.
Comment from Eric1
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I feel that this is a really strong entry for this 2-4-2 competition my friend, it has made a great impression (pun intentional) on me, I wish you good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
    Thanks Eric, I so admire his work. Loved the non-pun. :-)
reply by Eric1 on 30-Sep-2014
    You are very welcome my friend