*****Searching for My Angel.*****
A mission from Heavenly Father to save Earth!!!2 total reviews
Comment from kittykatnoel
Take out the "of" in this line, "at the current and tremendous of rate". Some of the lines could be reorganized to give a clearer reading. It is not clear from reading the piece as to what is going on, though the author's notes help. I think some definitions of various terms such as "peer mediator" and what does the line, "Locating the Positive from the Negative!" NOW"
24." mean, it does not make sense to me. Thank you for sharing your writing.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Take out the "of" in this line, "at the current and tremendous of rate". Some of the lines could be reorganized to give a clearer reading. It is not clear from reading the piece as to what is going on, though the author's notes help. I think some definitions of various terms such as "peer mediator" and what does the line, "Locating the Positive from the Negative!" NOW"
24." mean, it does not make sense to me. Thank you for sharing your writing.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Comment from giovannimariatommaso
Interesting, I thought that human beings took their place as human beings with spiritual human bodies in the place of the fallen angles. This poem appears to be an internal dialogue with facts to help soothe an anguishing soul.
Consider: return in a day and meet
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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Interesting, I thought that human beings took their place as human beings with spiritual human bodies in the place of the fallen angles. This poem appears to be an internal dialogue with facts to help soothe an anguishing soul.
Consider: return in a day and meet
Comment Written 28-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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Thanks for that my friend and although depressing, sad, and filled with my grief and pain... My latest piece!
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