Upcoming Season--Sea of White
Pissonnet (pi so nay)15 total reviews
Comment from Selina Stambi
Hello my friend, Debbie,
This one-liner is quite spectacular! Love the little rhyming groups.
Never heard of this form before.
Wonderful job!
Thinking of you and yours,
Love,
Sonali
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Hello my friend, Debbie,
This one-liner is quite spectacular! Love the little rhyming groups.
Never heard of this form before.
Wonderful job!
Thinking of you and yours,
Love,
Sonali
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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It was fun to try and make sense of something in 14 syllables. Glad you enjoyed it, my friend~~Debbie
Comment from dennis0530
Freezing writing, writhing sneezing. Blowing coldness, boldness slowing. Trekking, bending, sending squeaking. Relief, good grief.
Wah, there goes my two-syllable marching response.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Freezing writing, writhing sneezing. Blowing coldness, boldness slowing. Trekking, bending, sending squeaking. Relief, good grief.
Wah, there goes my two-syllable marching response.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Love it, my friend. This started my day of with a smile~Debbie
Comment from me_tudor
Love the poem but it is too early to be thinking about snow. Our leaves are just now changing! But I do love the picture.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Love the poem but it is too early to be thinking about snow. Our leaves are just now changing! But I do love the picture.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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snow go, heck take a trek. No not the most pleasant of seasons. Thank you~Debbie
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading your poem. It was a fun way to read the descriptions of snow. I happen to enjoy snow, as long as I can watch it float down while sitting by a fireplace, drinking hot chocolate.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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I enjoyed reading your poem. It was a fun way to read the descriptions of snow. I happen to enjoy snow, as long as I can watch it float down while sitting by a fireplace, drinking hot chocolate.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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I agree it is wonderful to watch, not so much to be out in. Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from rmj09
This definitely fulfills a Pissonnet and the picture adds to the story showing what the words are drawing as their picture.
The Thought of winter is a joy, I love to shovel snow and if it is to heavy I have it plowed out of my drive. I love watching snow dancing in the sky.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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This definitely fulfills a Pissonnet and the picture adds to the story showing what the words are drawing as their picture.
The Thought of winter is a joy, I love to shovel snow and if it is to heavy I have it plowed out of my drive. I love watching snow dancing in the sky.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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It does help to have someone to plow the heavy stuff. Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This style has suddenly come alive on Fanstory. This one is really good, it flows beautifully all along the line. I am just hoping we don't get the snow this year! Looks very pretty though! A lovely Pissonnet. :) Sandra
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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This style has suddenly come alive on Fanstory. This one is really good, it flows beautifully all along the line. I am just hoping we don't get the snow this year! Looks very pretty though! A lovely Pissonnet. :) Sandra
Comment Written 27-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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I agree it is wonderful to watch, not so much to be out in. Thank you, my friend~Debbie
Comment from SteveY
Did you have to remind me of this already at the end of September? I moved away from Idaho to Oklahoma to find a warmer climate especially during the winter.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Did you have to remind me of this already at the end of September? I moved away from Idaho to Oklahoma to find a warmer climate especially during the winter.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Maybe southern Teas would have been a choice. In Iowa, we go from sweltering hot and humid, to buried in snow with few days in between. Thank you so very much, my kind friend~Debbie
Comment from barkingdog
LOL Scoop, droop. I remember those days. Total exhaustion after shoveling snow. I'm out of it now in FL and don't miss any part the freezing season. I prefer pictures now. LOL
You made me smile with this one, Debbie. Thank you.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2014
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LOL Scoop, droop. I remember those days. Total exhaustion after shoveling snow. I'm out of it now in FL and don't miss any part the freezing season. I prefer pictures now. LOL
You made me smile with this one, Debbie. Thank you.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2014
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Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Dawn Munro
Ooooh, Debbie, this sounds SO much like winter, especially when read aloud! What a great poem. I love this new form you are using - might read some more about it and give it a whirl! Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2014
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Ooooh, Debbie, this sounds SO much like winter, especially when read aloud! What a great poem. I love this new form you are using - might read some more about it and give it a whirl! Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2014
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Thank you again, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Eric1
Hi Debbie, this is a beautifully written Pissonet, and sticks well to the rules laid down, it does indeed look like a line of ants, well chosen words my friend.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2014
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Hi Debbie, this is a beautifully written Pissonet, and sticks well to the rules laid down, it does indeed look like a line of ants, well chosen words my friend.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2014
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Thank you again, my friend~Debbie