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Little tummy aches

Last year's halloween with the 3 year old twin boys.

5 total reviews 
Comment from Judy Couch
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It's the responsibility of the parents to ration the goodies and not let the kids eat it all in one night. You followed the requirements of the prompt well.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 24-Sep-2014
    This is true, but you know how kiddo's can be sneaky lol. Thank you the awesome review and stars.
    God Bless!
Comment from Joan E.
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Welcome to FanStory--I hope the site fulfills your goals for membership.

I enjoyed your descriptive 5-7-5 and hope there will be a sequel this year! Thanks for sharing some holiday glee- Joan

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 24-Sep-2014
    Thank you for the excellent stars and review. This site is ever so inspiring and I am happy to have joined.
    God Bless!
reply by Joan E. on 24-Sep-2014
    I just realized your poem was for a blind contest--best wishes- Joan
Comment from emrpoems
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A non fearful aspect of the Halloween trick and treat experience.
Perfect syllable count for the prompt
best wishes in the contest

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
    Thank you so much, I'm new at this and enjoying every minute of it.
Comment from adewpearl
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Ghost and Goblin's - drop the apostrophe
I would make it ghosts and goblins
I like the alliteration
it is clear this is about Halloween without mentioning the word Halloween
I love the cute focus on the effect of eating all those treats
Brooke

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
    Thank you for your continuing support, I edited and it works much better this way. I also changed the title to little tummy aches, i noticed someone else had used ghosts and goblins in their title. God Bless!
Comment from Acquired Taste
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Very cute assessment of Halloween (which name you did not use). And with twin boys aged three - figure it was a tough night just getting them ready let alone topped off with upset stomachs. My wishes for good luck! AT=/

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
    Thank you very much for the review and awesome stars. The twins where a feat that's for sure. Thank you again and God Bless!