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Halloween 5-7-514 total reviews
Comment from nordicgirl
One of two excellent entries. I may have to flip a coin. A nice underlying message. I hope parents take heed. This can and does happen. Good luck.
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One of two excellent entries. I may have to flip a coin. A nice underlying message. I hope parents take heed. This can and does happen. Good luck.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2014
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi,
Especially this and age one should not let their kids do anything with all the bad things out there. Worse around the holidays too.
Great message in this one. Best of luck in the contest
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
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Hi,
Especially this and age one should not let their kids do anything with all the bad things out there. Worse around the holidays too.
Great message in this one. Best of luck in the contest
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
Comment Written 24-Sep-2014
Comment from Judy Couch
That is scary. I have often thought that Halloween is the perfect night for child molestors and other creeps to be prowling around looking for victims. Your poem points out the dangers well.
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That is scary. I have often thought that Halloween is the perfect night for child molestors and other creeps to be prowling around looking for victims. Your poem points out the dangers well.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2014
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh no you DON'T! Don't you DARE invite that child in, you evil, wicked, green-skinned, wart-nosed hags! I HATE you. You make it hard on the whole community of us. (LOL)(See what your poem inspired? Now THAT's a good poem! Good luck, from a GOOD witch.)
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Oh no you DON'T! Don't you DARE invite that child in, you evil, wicked, green-skinned, wart-nosed hags! I HATE you. You make it hard on the whole community of us. (LOL)(See what your poem inspired? Now THAT's a good poem! Good luck, from a GOOD witch.)
Comment Written 24-Sep-2014
Comment from Dean Kuch
As the Cowardly Lion from the movie, The Wizard of Oz, so eloquently states..."Not no way, not no how!" No way would I allow a young child to go 'trick-or-treating' by themselves. Not with all of the wackos we having running around today, I'm not!
I guess those three lovely ladies have decided to have this darling little girl over for dinner.
I wonder what goes best with girl, red, or white wine?
I'll opt for red.
Well done, and good luck!
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As the Cowardly Lion from the movie, The Wizard of Oz, so eloquently states..."Not no way, not no how!" No way would I allow a young child to go 'trick-or-treating' by themselves. Not with all of the wackos we having running around today, I'm not!
I guess those three lovely ladies have decided to have this darling little girl over for dinner.
I wonder what goes best with girl, red, or white wine?
I'll opt for red.
Well done, and good luck!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
Comment from emrpoems
Perfect syllable count for the 5-7-5 prompt
Good advice for mother who allow their children to go ot for this season alone.
Stunning presentation.
Good luck in the contest
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Perfect syllable count for the 5-7-5 prompt
Good advice for mother who allow their children to go ot for this season alone.
Stunning presentation.
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
Comment from JM
This is a wise warning that all responsible parents should heed. I think I will share your poem with my family because we have a lot of "delicious" little kids in our clan. Terrific poem.
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This is a wise warning that all responsible parents should heed. I think I will share your poem with my family because we have a lot of "delicious" little kids in our clan. Terrific poem.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
Comment from JudyS
Nice entry to the contest. Good writing. I enjoyed the read and I agree, don't let the kids to alone! It's just dangerous no days, not to mention scary. Best of luck in the contest. Judy
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Nice entry to the contest. Good writing. I enjoyed the read and I agree, don't let the kids to alone! It's just dangerous no days, not to mention scary. Best of luck in the contest. Judy
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
Comment from trimple
LOL
OO ERR!
Great little shorty Michael.
Much said about the poor kids demise, great pic too :)
good luck
trimple:)
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LOL
OO ERR!
Great little shorty Michael.
Much said about the poor kids demise, great pic too :)
good luck
trimple:)
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
Comment from Trybuck
Another child went missing today
Last seen on FanStory Boulevard
Hair light brunette, eyes bluish grey
Wearing red skirt with black top
With a hat from the devil's yard
If you spot her, call the cop
His new number is BR 549
But talk plain, please don't whine...
Well done with your entry, Buck
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Another child went missing today
Last seen on FanStory Boulevard
Hair light brunette, eyes bluish grey
Wearing red skirt with black top
With a hat from the devil's yard
If you spot her, call the cop
His new number is BR 549
But talk plain, please don't whine...
Well done with your entry, Buck
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014