Moon Repair
Naani44 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
Stunning presentation of your poem, which is in excellent syllable count and line count for the naani
I really like the visual of the tendrils of silver light
and the assonance and consonance in that line
you create mood in a compelling way, also
Brooke
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Stunning presentation of your poem, which is in excellent syllable count and line count for the naani
I really like the visual of the tendrils of silver light
and the assonance and consonance in that line
you create mood in a compelling way, also
Brooke
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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And I love your very meaningful review. Thank you my friend. Pili
Comment from tdragonfly
How can something so far away have such an impact on our lives? It can set the tone for the evening . It can turn a crazy day into a relaxing evening filled with promise.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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How can something so far away have such an impact on our lives? It can set the tone for the evening . It can turn a crazy day into a relaxing evening filled with promise.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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It is so true, sad is the night without the moon. Thank you myoet friend for your meaningful comment. Pili
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
A very lovely naani Pili. The moon certainly has a powerful influence on people. Some not good, lunatics for example, but if it has the power to repair 'love wounds' that is great. Your naani in 22 syllables states this clearly. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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A very lovely naani Pili. The moon certainly has a powerful influence on people. Some not good, lunatics for example, but if it has the power to repair 'love wounds' that is great. Your naani in 22 syllables states this clearly. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much Dorothy for your wonderful comment. Pili
Comment from Acquired Taste
The moon heals all wounds - suspect that may have been blasphemy during the Salem Witch Trials - but it does make for a great Naani entry. Good luck...AT=/
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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The moon heals all wounds - suspect that may have been blasphemy during the Salem Witch Trials - but it does make for a great Naani entry. Good luck...AT=/
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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LOL. Thank you so much AT. PILI
Comment from Pyrrho
The moon as a catchall metaphor for romantic love gets stretched to far too often for me. Now you have it fixing all problems and eliminating the bad part of the past as well. Sounds loony to me.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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The moon as a catchall metaphor for romantic love gets stretched to far too often for me. Now you have it fixing all problems and eliminating the bad part of the past as well. Sounds loony to me.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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I hope poetically loony... Thank you my friend. Pili
Comment from stroncoso1
This is an enjoyable and cleverly descriptive poem. I like the title and your lines. They complete a sentiment poetically and effectively. The picture works well with your poem. I love the line, "moon ethereal veils tendrils of silver light." The poem rhymes and work well. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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This is an enjoyable and cleverly descriptive poem. I like the title and your lines. They complete a sentiment poetically and effectively. The picture works well with your poem. I love the line, "moon ethereal veils tendrils of silver light." The poem rhymes and work well. Nicely done.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much for a great comment. Pili
Comment from steevie
looking skyward at night, its hard to disbelieve that all cannot be repaired by the sheer glow of the moonlight itself ...
good job Phili on this write so deep
steve
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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looking skyward at night, its hard to disbelieve that all cannot be repaired by the sheer glow of the moonlight itself ...
good job Phili on this write so deep
steve
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Thank you so very much Steevie... Pili
Comment from lynglyng
This poem is full of emotion. It is well done and the emotion is felt in your good word usage. I would not change anything about it. Your color scheme adds very nicely to the feel of the poem.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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This poem is full of emotion. It is well done and the emotion is felt in your good word usage. I would not change anything about it. Your color scheme adds very nicely to the feel of the poem.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Thank you so very much Lynglyng, great review. Pili
Comment from words
Love your short ode to moon's love-wound repair.
Glad to know that you are a moon lover too.
The heat is in the triple digits today, am looking forward to the cool of the moon's light.
Hugs, d
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Love your short ode to moon's love-wound repair.
Glad to know that you are a moon lover too.
The heat is in the triple digits today, am looking forward to the cool of the moon's light.
Hugs, d
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Aren't all poets???? OMG,,, three digits... Here in the nineties , but so humid... Love the " winter" in Florida, but summer is pure horror... Thank you for loving the moon with me. Hugs. Pili
Comment from JudyS
Pili, What a wonderful poem. You have said so much in just few words. Wonderful writing on this one. Best of luck in the contest. Judy
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Pili, What a wonderful poem. You have said so much in just few words. Wonderful writing on this one. Best of luck in the contest. Judy
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Judy thank you so very much, great comment. Pili
