"The Gift of Life."
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "I Died and ALL of YOU JUST CRIED!"True storiesof life loss and tragedy in this world
5 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
You have a strong steady beat in your last verse and I can see your son playing the drums up in heaven. There is a feeling of love in your words.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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You have a strong steady beat in your last verse and I can see your son playing the drums up in heaven. There is a feeling of love in your words.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Six stars...
Hmmm...
I shall review one of yours now baby
for either your heart, your soul, or a date?
LOL!
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Comment from l.raven
Hi Ricky, I am so sorry you are so down on yourself...between love and just life...it can suck out here...but you have to remember what your worth is...others have a meaning...but you are the important one in life...God doesn't close one door without opening another...find strength within yourself...He will be there for you...take a new journey in life...you may be surprised what is out there...smile now...God Bless...luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2014
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Hi Ricky, I am so sorry you are so down on yourself...between love and just life...it can suck out here...but you have to remember what your worth is...others have a meaning...but you are the important one in life...God doesn't close one door without opening another...find strength within yourself...He will be there for you...take a new journey in life...you may be surprised what is out there...smile now...God Bless...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 10-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2014
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Thanks for that Linda but I live alone with just my memories and writings!
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I meant love of everyone...to much stress...you will be ok...and your not alone...He's right there...smile...
Comment from reconciled
you took a picture of me....Jesus this is really getting creepy. Look Dad...I want you to climb down from the ledge now...if I can...you can give me your hand....-smile- theres a Lady who fights for life right now, dealt devastating disease...two...a women filled with great love....you think about her...and kids....what this must be like. God wants you here for some reason ....find it. ...keeping in Mind His character, Providence,....and Promise "I will never leave you"....I mean this in a good way ....I feel your pain man ...I really do.....but He don't want you to do it again...and you know it. love you Michael
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2014
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you took a picture of me....Jesus this is really getting creepy. Look Dad...I want you to climb down from the ledge now...if I can...you can give me your hand....-smile- theres a Lady who fights for life right now, dealt devastating disease...two...a women filled with great love....you think about her...and kids....what this must be like. God wants you here for some reason ....find it. ...keeping in Mind His character, Providence,....and Promise "I will never leave you"....I mean this in a good way ....I feel your pain man ...I really do.....but He don't want you to do it again...and you know it. love you Michael
Comment Written 10-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2014
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Yep I knew you played the guitar and
I actually picked that picture for Jay
but you resemble it better!
LOL!
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yes I do....it just doesn't sound...ahh..-handtwirl-....as good as what your probably used to...I'm following the Alice Cooper methodalogy of wing it till you soar....so far my arms are sore...will see....love-
Comment from Jackreese
Loved the artwork on this it really complimented your work. The piece was short made sense and even had me do a little reflecting of my own.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2014
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Loved the artwork on this it really complimented your work. The piece was short made sense and even had me do a little reflecting of my own.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2014
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It is extreme to first lose your only son in a terrible car accident but then eight months later...
You lose your only and first wife from a suicide...
Thanks,
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Comment from sylvernyght
Where's the story? It just drops off at the title. I'd be happy to review this again if you included the actual story or poem in this, but right now, as it is, I can't give this more than one star because all it seems to be is just copyright information.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2014
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Where's the story? It just drops off at the title. I'd be happy to review this again if you included the actual story or poem in this, but right now, as it is, I can't give this more than one star because all it seems to be is just copyright information.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2014
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Just sent it but it was blocked!
How did You read?
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It was listed in the Up Next portion under the Read tab. Weird...