Comment from Amsterdam

Excellent

Quite, a story ....
Quite a story.

With an imagination like that ....

I'll bet... some of it wasn't imagination.

Anywho....

if you could write fiction this well you should try non fiction...

after all it is more scary and weird.

Great write.
am

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2014

All fiction is based a bit on reality, that's what makes it good. Thanks for the excellent review.

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

Wow! This is powerful. The ending took me completely by surprised. The characters are believable and so is the story, especially the meeting. the revenge part is creepy...serving it up cold.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2014

Thank you. I'm glad you liked and even thought it was creepy.

Comment from gurdeepgandhi

Excellent

superb!!fantastic!! i enjoyed your piece i binds me throughout the reading. a very nice way of story teling.And i must say a great ending. a very rare piece to read. thanks.
Gurdeep Gandhi

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2014

Thank you for the excellent review.

Comment from N.K. Wagner

Excellent

Your protagonist definitely got her revenge. An excellent story that skillfully diverts the reader's attention from what actually happening. Very well done. :) nancy

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2014

Thanks I'm glad you liked. Thank you for taking the time.

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

A powerful piece of writing that grabs the reader's attention and holds it right to the end. Never expected it to end that way but thinking about it that was appropriately served cold.
good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2014

Powerful is good. Thank you for the compliments and the excellent review.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

How powerful and kind of sick. I didn't expect that she would get him like that...yikes...addiction glad mine is coffee and sugar ,, and Fanstory..
Yikes this was an intriguing read,,,you had me
God bless

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2014

Yikes. Nice. Glass you enjoyed it. Thank you.

Comment from Fridayauthor

Excellent

Very terse, well written story that engages the reader very well. The dialog is particularly good and to the point.

I enjoyed reading this piece very much. Very nicely done posting.

Thank you.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2014

Thanks for the excellent review. It is much appreciated.

Comment from Victoria K

Excellent

An exciting read from start to finish!

You do a nice job of setting the scene, creating the central action and then letting the suspense build.

Great twist at the end; very well done!

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2014

Awesome. Thank you. I really appreciate it.

Comment from Max Edon

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this. It was very tense all the way through. I do have one nit=pick, though. I don't think a drug addict would be likely to take revenge on the person who first gave them drugs--too many other bad things happen to make them want to take revenge.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2014

Max. The cool thing is that I agree, the typical dig addict would not do that. That is the awesome thing about fiction we can explore the atypical. Thanks for the excellent review.

reply by Max Edon on 16-Sep-2014

You are welocme

Comment from RGstar

Exceptional

This certainly was a fitting entry.
Your style of writing very much plays a part in he success of this chapter. Fast pace , quirky and a no nonsense attitude about delivering your thesis.

Great twist at the end to complete the answer to the prompt.

A very good write.
Best wishes,
RGstar

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2014

RG, wow. Thank you truly for the review and the stars it is much appreciated.