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Expressing Myself

Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "1-6-1 (Smile)"
Writing my way out of depression / mental illness

4 total reviews 
Comment from Smoothiecool
Excellent
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good luck in the contest

your syllable count spot on

your few words in three lines portray that one asks for a smile as one things you are worth it

good visual

good rhyme not forced

cheers Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2014

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
    Thank you Smoothiecool!
Comment from l.raven
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Hey you, this is so very well said...I love the wording. so few words to say so much....The smile says it all...know your worth...and great write...perfect picture....Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2014

reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
    Wow! Thank you Linda, I am honored and you have made my day with this kind and generous review!
reply by l.raven on 27-Aug-2014
    you are so welcome...xxoo
Comment from DerivedBetter
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This was very original. I've reviewed several of these this morning and I think I've liked this one the best so far, but you do have some competition. thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2014

reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
    Thank you so much for your kind words of encouragement and the generous stars!
Comment from starkat
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wondering if you mean't ... 'you're' worthwhile, instead of 'your' worthwhile ---- you're worthwhile would make more sense. Anyway, nice job of rhyming that 1-6-1 -
Nice choice of thought-provoking photo.
Well done. Cheers ... ;)

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2014

reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014
    Thank you so much for the correction! And thank you for your kind review!