I Choose Rainbows
Viewing comments for Chapter 129 "Sorrow"Thoughts from the dark side
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Comment from rmj09
This is a well written poem about aging and the downfalls of aging. The upside is we are free to do whatever we want to do and do it in our time.
Keep writing
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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This is a well written poem about aging and the downfalls of aging. The upside is we are free to do whatever we want to do and do it in our time.
Keep writing
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Thanks
Comment from lynglyng
this poem had a very dramatic feel. you can sense the desperation of the narrator. Very well written and I didn't see anything that needed to be corrected. I thought the message in the poem was sad, but we all have to face death sometime or another. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, LyngLyng
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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this poem had a very dramatic feel. you can sense the desperation of the narrator. Very well written and I didn't see anything that needed to be corrected. I thought the message in the poem was sad, but we all have to face death sometime or another. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, LyngLyng
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Sorry for the downer.