Comment from michaelcahill

Excellent

lovely little view of the night that will soon disappear as the sun takes over and suddenly the stars and everything vanishes. but, soon it all returens. It never left. It was just too blindingly bright! mikey

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good week, Ine

Comment from Cumbrianlass

Excellent

Simple in its message. There's a certain comfort to be found in the knowledge that one will always follow the other. Nice work, Ine. I hope you do well in the contest.

Av

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good week, Ine

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

It's a never ending story with those two. The sun is for life. The moon is for romance. Well thought out and clearly written. Good alliteration with g-words. Have a good day.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good week, Ine

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

So true, and simply stated, Ine. When the moon's away, the sun will play.

Nicely done, and best of luck to you in the Lune contest, my friend. Have a super week!~Dean

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good week, Ine

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem.
It is a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the start.
Your words are right on point.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good week, Ine

reply by misscookie on 20-Aug-2014

You're very welcome, may you and yours have a bless day.
Cookie

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Moon gives light at night,
then goes 'way.
Sun appears instead.

a very well written lune poem, I wish you luck in the contest.
Mary

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good week, Ine

Comment from Bryana

Excellent

Lovely Lune poem, short but delicious.
I also love the moon, it has inspired
me many times.
The picture is also beautiful perfect
for your poem.

Good luck i8n the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good week, Ine

Comment from words

Excellent

So you are a moon lover too.

I have been a moon lover for a long time.

Under the light of the moon is my favorite time to jog.

Hugs,d

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good week, Ine

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Ine, this is a beautiful poem...you look at the picture and read the poem at the same time...and you can watch the sun come up....so very well written...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good week, Ine

reply by l.raven on 20-Aug-2014

you are so welcome...xxoo

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

Good luck with he write, Robina. A haunting image.
I wish you luck in the contest. your words certainly interact with the image.
Best wishes,
RG

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good week, Ine