~ Jack & Jill ~
....How men & women are different....17 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
good use of rhyming couplets including proximate rhyme like in mess/test and refreshed/mess
excellent humor
and use of illustrative examples
If you can't please - add the apostrophe
a fun combination of complaint and appreciation :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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good use of rhyming couplets including proximate rhyme like in mess/test and refreshed/mess
excellent humor
and use of illustrative examples
If you can't please - add the apostrophe
a fun combination of complaint and appreciation :-) Brooke
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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Thank you so very much!!
Comment from gypsycaravan
Very clever but I can think of many more differences. Too bad there was a word limit for this prompt. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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Very clever but I can think of many more differences. Too bad there was a word limit for this prompt. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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I'm so happy you liked this
Comment from Gargantuan2
You have quite the list in the poem of choice. You might place an apostrophe in the word cant (can't). I hope you have luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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You have quite the list in the poem of choice. You might place an apostrophe in the word cant (can't). I hope you have luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Jay Squires
A tad tilted in favor of the woman, methinks it was written by one of the squatters.
But, whichever, the poem is cleverly written, not too forced with the meter and the rhyme.
All in all, a good job.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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A tad tilted in favor of the woman, methinks it was written by one of the squatters.
But, whichever, the poem is cleverly written, not too forced with the meter and the rhyme.
All in all, a good job.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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Thanks Jay ....I appreciate the great review and rating as well.
Comment from Thorin's.elf
"Hot mess" contemporary funny. There is a little disagreement in plurals. between subject and verb. "Woman enjoy" pampering spas and fun malls.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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"Hot mess" contemporary funny. There is a little disagreement in plurals. between subject and verb. "Woman enjoy" pampering spas and fun malls.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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Hello...thanks for the great comment and rating. I appreciate it a great deal. Also, thank you for pointing out the slight error. I quickly fixed that. ;)
Comment from lalajovanoski
What beautiful imagery in this. Great use of calm and peaceful words to show your images. I loved the feeling of a dream like state while absorbing nature around you. Great job on this.! Exquisitely composed. Love, L J
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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What beautiful imagery in this. Great use of calm and peaceful words to show your images. I loved the feeling of a dream like state while absorbing nature around you. Great job on this.! Exquisitely composed. Love, L J
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Linda England Bonam
That was really cute! You got right to the point, too, right from the beginning. Had to chuckle because it was so true!! Poor men, we have them all figured out, and they haven't a clue!!! Good luck with your entry.
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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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That was really cute! You got right to the point, too, right from the beginning. Had to chuckle because it was so true!! Poor men, we have them all figured out, and they haven't a clue!!! Good luck with your entry.
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Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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I'm really happy you liked this. Thank you so very much my friend....xoxo
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I'm really happy you liked this. Thank you so very much my friend....xoxo
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I'm really happy you liked this. Thank you so very much my friend....xoxo
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I'm really happy you liked this. Thank you so very much my friend....xoxo
