~ Angel Sibling ~
A poem for an Angel....15 total reviews
Comment from frogbook
Lovely poem honoring your little one gone too soon. We lost a brother when he was 6 wks old and I will never forget that or my Mother's pain.
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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Lovely poem honoring your little one gone too soon. We lost a brother when he was 6 wks old and I will never forget that or my Mother's pain.
Comment Written 03-May-2016
reply by the author on 03-May-2016
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Thank you so very much!!
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Thank you so very much!!
Comment from Nosha17
I really believe it helps to write about the special person one has lost. When both my dogs died last year, I wrote about them and it comforted me a great deal. Lovely poem with good rhyming and imagery. Clear message of love. Faye
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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I really believe it helps to write about the special person one has lost. When both my dogs died last year, I wrote about them and it comforted me a great deal. Lovely poem with good rhyming and imagery. Clear message of love. Faye
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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I also believe the same thing my friend. In just 3 months I lost Sophia, a brand new puppy and my best friend of 13 years, my Yorkie Sage! Been a rough year in 2013 for sure and yet somehow, I survived. xoxo
Comment from Ben Colder
she's a cute. Nothing is as precious as a child. Looks as if the Lord had just made this little girl. Amazing how they can grow so fast. Blessings to all.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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she's a cute. Nothing is as precious as a child. Looks as if the Lord had just made this little girl. Amazing how they can grow so fast. Blessings to all.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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Hello Ben,
Thank you so much for taking the time to read about my Angel Sophia. She was taken back to Heaven much to soon at only 24 days old. She was misdiagnosed but could've had a normal healthy life if treated. xoxo
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I am so sorry to know this. I lost a grad son at 20 months tough call losing these kids. My prayers are for your strength
Comment from Acquired Taste
Beautiful and heartfelt tribute to a lovely angel that is constantly missed. Though you had her for such short a time, her impact on your life will last forever, just as He would want. I wish you the best of luck in this contest. AT=/
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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Beautiful and heartfelt tribute to a lovely angel that is constantly missed. Though you had her for such short a time, her impact on your life will last forever, just as He would want. I wish you the best of luck in this contest. AT=/
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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Thank you for reading my piece on my Angel Sophia. I truly appreciate it a great deal! xoxo
Comment from Eric1
Oh Heidi, what a heartrending and beautifully written poem in memory of your lovely Granddaughter Sophia, it has good rhyme and proximate rhyme and a lovely rhythm and flow, but who cares? it's the content that is so important, I hope you and Sophia win this contest my friend.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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Oh Heidi, what a heartrending and beautifully written poem in memory of your lovely Granddaughter Sophia, it has good rhyme and proximate rhyme and a lovely rhythm and flow, but who cares? it's the content that is so important, I hope you and Sophia win this contest my friend.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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Thank you so very much Eric! I'm honored for the world to read about Sophia, my sweet Angel....xoxo
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You are very welcome Heidi xoxox
Comment from Genya
This was just so sad yet she lives on which turned the poem into something really special. It started off so happy until I read at 24 days she went off to heaven you see. Really enjoyed reading this though. Genya
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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This was just so sad yet she lives on which turned the poem into something really special. It started off so happy until I read at 24 days she went off to heaven you see. Really enjoyed reading this though. Genya
Comment Written 18-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2014
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Thank you so very much for the amazing comment and review....I really appreciate this. Baby Sophia was my whole world so when she grew her Angel wings my WHOLE world collapsed!! xoxo
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi,
Such a beauty, and indeed an Angel. It's always hard to understand a little one leaving us before they've ever started on their journey.
Perhaps, her short journey in this life can be seen as 'love personified.' A blessing of appreciation of all that's pure and simple about love.
I remember reading about Sophia recently. Lovely dedication, Grandma.
Prayers to you and yours. Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax ('/')
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Hi,
Such a beauty, and indeed an Angel. It's always hard to understand a little one leaving us before they've ever started on their journey.
Perhaps, her short journey in this life can be seen as 'love personified.' A blessing of appreciation of all that's pure and simple about love.
I remember reading about Sophia recently. Lovely dedication, Grandma.
Prayers to you and yours. Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax ('/')
Comment Written 17-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Thank you Jax for the wonderful comment and rating. Your kind words touched me deeply!! Sophia was the biggest blessing we could've ever dreamed of. Yet just 24 days later was the worst real life nightmare imaginable. Thank you again for your support my friend....xoxo
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Thank you Jax for the wonderful comment and rating. Your kind words touched me deeply!! Sophia was the biggest blessing we could've ever dreamed of. Yet just 24 days later was the worst real life nightmare imaginable. Thank you again for your support my friend....xoxo
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She got my vote! ('-') Blessings....
Comment from Tsukuyomi969
I don't know that this is a poem for a child, but it was good. And so sad! It was well written with no weird areas or pauses. Good job, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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I don't know that this is a poem for a child, but it was good. And so sad! It was well written with no weird areas or pauses. Good job, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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I made this for a child that may have lost a sibling. Thank you for the comment and rating
Comment from Dean Kuch
A-w-w-w-w... Have I misunderstood this, or did lil' baby Sophia pass away at 24 days old? If I have, I sincerely apologize. Yet, if I am right, then this is truly heartbreaking. No parent should have to outlive their own child. Whether it be complications from birth, killed in the service to their country, or felled by some dreaded disease, under any circumstances it just seems devastatingly unbearable to me.
Well done, and I wish you the best of luck in this contest.~Dean
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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A-w-w-w-w... Have I misunderstood this, or did lil' baby Sophia pass away at 24 days old? If I have, I sincerely apologize. Yet, if I am right, then this is truly heartbreaking. No parent should have to outlive their own child. Whether it be complications from birth, killed in the service to their country, or felled by some dreaded disease, under any circumstances it just seems devastatingly unbearable to me.
Well done, and I wish you the best of luck in this contest.~Dean
Comment Written 17-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Hello Dean....
Sadly yes baby Sophia passed away at only 24 days old. She was completely misdiagnosed by a Professor at The Children's Hospital with a major hole In aorta. Such a tragedy for us all. ;(
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That's terrible, and so sad. Your family (it is your family, is it not?) will be in my family's prayers...
Comment from ProSongwriter
Hi,
This is so touching. It's just so unfortunate there is cause to write this. From previous marriages, my wife and I have both a lost a son ...hers at 33 years of age and mine at 22. Both died in vehicle accidents. Thus, we can identify, to some degree. The bright and uplifting ending was just perfect! Very nice, although poignant. Good work! Best to you,
Alan
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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Hi,
This is so touching. It's just so unfortunate there is cause to write this. From previous marriages, my wife and I have both a lost a son ...hers at 33 years of age and mine at 22. Both died in vehicle accidents. Thus, we can identify, to some degree. The bright and uplifting ending was just perfect! Very nice, although poignant. Good work! Best to you,
Alan
Comment Written 17-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014
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This was such a heart breaking tragedy for us. Baby Sophia was our life but not many are lucky enough to meet their Angel. I was lucky enough to have held mine. xoxo
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Yes, you were so fortunate. Best too you!
Alan
