The Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "A Meeting That Changed Two Lives."Subtitle: God Never Lets Go!
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Comment from judiverse
This is really sweet, and you show that good things are worth waiting for. You set up the meeting with Louise very nicely, and she is a contrast to the woman you mention at the beginning, who had been stringing you along while seeing another man. You do a fine job of describing Louise and the qualities that made her stand out for you. It was cute the way she changed her mind and said "yes" to going steady. As you say, this was all part of God's plan for you. Excellent flow in this and well organized presentation of events. judi
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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This is really sweet, and you show that good things are worth waiting for. You set up the meeting with Louise very nicely, and she is a contrast to the woman you mention at the beginning, who had been stringing you along while seeing another man. You do a fine job of describing Louise and the qualities that made her stand out for you. It was cute the way she changed her mind and said "yes" to going steady. As you say, this was all part of God's plan for you. Excellent flow in this and well organized presentation of events. judi
Comment Written 29-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2014
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Thanks 4 the great review glad u enjoyed the read
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You're so welcome. It read very smoothly. judi
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Thanks again I answered on the Mobile from the inlaws place I guess you would have picked that up from the abbreviated SMS hehe.
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You're very welcome. A great chapter. judi
Comment from seaglass
I love the way love begins. I also met my husband at work. The fact we were both working with special needs kids, already gave a something in common.
I think you need a comma.
"Following all this(,) Louise's Mum being the good Catholic mother she was, began to scheme to try and break us up."
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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I love the way love begins. I also met my husband at work. The fact we were both working with special needs kids, already gave a something in common.
I think you need a comma.
"Following all this(,) Louise's Mum being the good Catholic mother she was, began to scheme to try and break us up."
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Thanks friend appreciate you coming by. As I mentioned this is a split of a formerly large chapter as suggested by Mikey. Funny fella hehe! He didn't decide where it was to split though haha! Accompanying other half is Chapter 20 now.
Comment from GWinterwin
Oh yes what a delightful story telling of your younger years, and many of the sad times you had. Things seem to always work out for those who give it to God. It is in God's time that things seem to work.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Oh yes what a delightful story telling of your younger years, and many of the sad times you had. Things seem to always work out for those who give it to God. It is in God's time that things seem to work.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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AMEn Bro thanks for your review. Hoping to get all this out again soon this was a division of one big chapter appreciate the help of some FS friends. you would have read the second part now at ch 20 already. More changes coming Mikey has helped me with length of chapters etc.
Comment from c_lucas
Long relationships often have humorous beginnings. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an interesting read.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Long relationships often have humorous beginnings. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an interesting read.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Thanks mate hope you got to Chapter 20 this was originally one big chapter. Mikey has helped me about splitting some of these up watch out for more.
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You're welcome, Geoff. Charlie.
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You're welcome, Geoff. Charlie
Comment from harleyangelbrat
This is a good story. It kept my interest and left me wanting to read more. I really enjoyed reading this very much. It is an excellent read. God bless you!
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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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This is a good story. It kept my interest and left me wanting to read more. I really enjoyed reading this very much. It is an excellent read. God bless you!
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Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Thanks been around 4ages just split this n following chapter as 2 big thanks 4dropping by
Comment from CR Delport
I don't know why if a relationship fail, you always look into yourself for the cause. What did I do wrong? More often than not it has nothing to do with you. This is another well written and interesting piece.
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I don't know why if a relationship fail, you always look into yourself for the cause. What did I do wrong? More often than not it has nothing to do with you. This is another well written and interesting piece.
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Comment Written 28-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2014
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Thanks mate this n next chapter split as 2big
