Comment from Aiona

Exceptional

LOL! I had to look at your profile to realize you're from the UK. Then I read it again, and you're right... Shaun does rhyme with horn! Hee! Love the bawdy limerick!

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014

Hi Aiona :) Thank you for your great feedback and for the lovely 6 star award! Very generous of you... my hubby is called Shaun (though he's not quite as frustrated as his namesake!)
Kindest regards as always, Debra :) x

Comment from Pyrrho

Excellent

There was a sweet lassie named Debby
Who sometimes said yes sometimes mebby
When she complied
You were in for ride
And when she said mebby was crebbyâ??

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

Hi Pyrrho :) loved your limerick style feedback - thank you! What does the last word mean?! I haven't come across it before... Kindest regards Debra :)

reply by Pyrrho on 20-Aug-2014

It should read,crebby.

Debby, mebby, crebby
Debby, maybe, crabby

reply by the author on 20-Aug-2014

Ta :)
You know, that could be me you're talking about there ;)
I pronounce maybe as mebby and I'm known to be crabby at times... You've been talking to my hubby right?!
Thanks for the laugh :)

Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the limerick Poor Shaun the Rhino had problems with his horn. It shattered his poor wife and quite turned her off. Now Poor Shaun must settle for porn. Great work. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014

Thank you Ellie for your great feedback and good luck wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards as always, Debra :)

Comment from rrabinow

Excellent

Great use of hummor in your poem. Great use of rhyme as well. Well written poem for this prompt that followed all the rules. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014

Thank you rrabinow for your great feedback and good luck wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards, Debra :)

Comment from acerisestory

Excellent

So funny -- and descriptive! Great use of alliteration with rampant/rhino; torn/tattered; Shaun/settle. Your rhyming is right on.

It makes me laugh to even imagine a rhino named Shaun.

A great entry for the contest. Best of luck. Alana

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014

Thank you for your great feedback and good luck wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards, Debra :)
Ps. My hubby is called Shaun (but he's not a frustrated old rhino!)

reply by acerisestory on 17-Aug-2014

You are welcome! I am so glad to hear that your Shaun is not a frustrated rhino :) Alana

Comment from stanishmichelle

Excellent

Poor Shaun has to settle for porn -loved that. After seeing the damaging effects that he inflicted on wife, he's better stock up on porn. What a horny rhino. Well done.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014

Thank you for your great feedback :) kindest regards, Debra

Comment from BlueFlag

Excellent

cute and funny limmereick
Good luck in the contest might have to read all
before voting yours was the first one I read..
have a good day...
best of luck I gave it 5 stars.....

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014

Thank you BlueFlag for your great feedback and good luck wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards as always, Debra :)

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This limerick contains all that we would look for in the format , the beat, and the traditional smutty storyline. I think the rhyme could be helped by finding a better word than Shaun, since it has no story value. How about Lorne? Happy day.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014

Hi Bill, thank you for your great feedback and suggestion for changing the name if my horny old rhino! I never heard the name Lorne before... I chose the name Shaun after my husband (although there is no similarities between him and the rhino, it just tickled me!) kindest regards, Debra

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Hah! Rhino porn...now that could get a bit sticky. I'm sure it made ole Shaun quite randy-dandy! At least his wife doesn't mind...or, does she?

Very funny, and good luck to you!~

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014

Thank you Dean for your fun feedback and good luck wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards as always, Debra :)

reply by Dean Kuch on 17-Aug-2014

It was my pleasure, Debra.

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

This is a brilliantly funny and hilarious entry for this limerick competition, great alliteration and imagery, i wish you lots of luck my friend.

 Comment Written 15-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2014

Thank you Eric for your great feedback and good luck wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards, Debra :)

reply by Eric1 on 17-Aug-2014

You are so welcome Debra.