Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

love those last two words! "core expressions" says a lot and is a great ending!

excellent blitz! thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest :)

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014

Thank you shelley kaye, for your kind comments and generous review!!

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

I'm not going to comment on the form's rules - I'm just assuming you followed them :-)
good alliteration in world of words
I like the commentary on the writing process and the upbeat effect writing has on both the writer and reader
Brooke

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014

Thank you Brooke, I'm glad you liked the poem. It is kind of complicated, but fun to do!

Comment from rrabinow

Excellent

Great job with the blitz poem that you entered for this prompt. It flows really well. I like that you wrote it in cursive. And great picture. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014

Thank you rrabinow

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, playinaround, you did an excellent job writing this blitz poem about expressing ourselves. I enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014

Thank you sweetwoodjax!