Rants, Raves and Tributes
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Mikey, I Likey, By Krikey"Fanstory Praises, Woes & Go's.
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Comment from kiwisteveh
I always like to see tribute poems - they always express a sincere admiration and respect, as this one does, even though it is written in light-hearted vein. I enjoyed the happy rhyming and the generally cheerful tone.
Steve
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
I always like to see tribute poems - they always express a sincere admiration and respect, as this one does, even though it is written in light-hearted vein. I enjoyed the happy rhyming and the generally cheerful tone.
Steve
Comment Written 04-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Thanks Steve. Appreciate your fine review. I am glad you came now and not earlier as I only got the last 2 verses on later this aft ernoon.
Comment from Emily George
So Mikey's agood bloke by Krikey I like good blokes I'm married to one an Aussie too.
Great use of colloquialism and a lovely tribute for anyone. I don,t think I have reviewed, or been reviewed by Mikey by Krikey I'm scared sh..less.
I'm English but Aussie husband says its crikey.
PLEASE prove him wrong LOl
Great rhyme and love that illustration
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
So Mikey's agood bloke by Krikey I like good blokes I'm married to one an Aussie too.
Great use of colloquialism and a lovely tribute for anyone. I don,t think I have reviewed, or been reviewed by Mikey by Krikey I'm scared sh..less.
I'm English but Aussie husband says its crikey.
PLEASE prove him wrong LOl
Great rhyme and love that illustration
Comment Written 04-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Hi Emily I pu t a note in the Author's notes look for Michael Cahill's profile. Yeah I got into trouble for mispelling Crikey ok! Thanks for the great review.
Comment from Pyrrho
I am happy to award you an excellent fiver assessment for purposely making about every bad move a poet can make in a poem and making it SING to me.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
I am happy to award you an excellent fiver assessment for purposely making about every bad move a poet can make in a poem and making it SING to me.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Ha so you liked in spite of my errors huh you have managed to see the new version with the extra verses I think originally only the first verse when I got all the reviews today. Thanks. Not sure we have met before.
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I never interact with those who misspell Crikey.
On the other hand, I never did have much damned respect for a man who can only spell a word one way.
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Hehe reminds me of the old match maker on Fiddler on the Roof "OH we suffer...how we suffer!!" Thanks Nice to make a new friend.
Comment from CR Delport
I agree with you there. Mikey's writings and suggestions are wonderful. Let's hope Tom pays attention to them. This is well done.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
I agree with you there. Mikey's writings and suggestions are wonderful. Let's hope Tom pays attention to them. This is well done.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Thanks friend the bird has flown I think got a couple more verses to add to this hope you will come back and thanks for the review. I plan to look at the Forum as well.
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other verses now added I think the colour arrangement as gone sorry.
Comment from Tomes Johnston
It is always good to get constructive criticism and pointers on how to improve either writing or a website. I like to get pointers on how to improve as well. This is what makes you grow and improve as a writer.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
It is always good to get constructive criticism and pointers on how to improve either writing or a website. I like to get pointers on how to improve as well. This is what makes you grow and improve as a writer.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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AMEN old friend how true. Glad you came by have not seen any of your stuff lately have you been busy elsewhere? I have some more verses I just wrote today to add to this, so do come back please and thanks again.
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other verses now added I think the colour arrangement as gone sorry.
Comment from Glasstruth
A fun poem to read. The rhyming is unusual, but that's okay. Originality is always a good thing. I feel you could expand on this. I felt as I was just getting started, it ended. Thanks for sharing. Les
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
A fun poem to read. The rhyming is unusual, but that's okay. Originality is always a good thing. I feel you could expand on this. I felt as I was just getting started, it ended. Thanks for sharing. Les
Comment Written 04-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Hi les, yeah I want to do a second verse but I had to check with Michael Cahill ( Mikey) as to pronunciation of his surname as I only know one other "K-Hill" hehe and that was on Executive Decision with Kurt Jackson I think as well. Thanks for the great review.
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My pleasure. :)))
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other verses now added I think the colour arrangement as gone sorry.
Comment from rjuselius
this is a fine commentary on fs rules! i wouldn't mind some improvement especially in voting. please consider an alternative..
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
this is a fine commentary on fs rules! i wouldn't mind some improvement especially in voting. please consider an alternative..
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 04-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Thanks Rebekka Don't think we have met before I plan to do a second verse will let you know when t is done had to sort our MIkey (Michael Cahill's) way of pronouncing his last name as it is different in Australia. Cheers.
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other verses now added I think the colour arrangement as gone sorry.
Comment from chasennov
"Mikey, I Likey, By Krikey" I liked what I read here and wish someone will start implementing the great idea, so that this site can become easier to work on. Well done.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
"Mikey, I Likey, By Krikey" I liked what I read here and wish someone will start implementing the great idea, so that this site can become easier to work on. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Thanks old friend. I know you have been a great supporter of mine on FS. Look for Michael Cahill's work if you don't know him alsready
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You are more than welcome.
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other verses now added I think the colour arrangement as gone sorry.
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No worries mate.
Comment from Trybuck
I think we get the point
By Krikey, you like old Mikey
and his take on reviews
An interesting way to support a friend. Well done, Buck
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
I think we get the point
By Krikey, you like old Mikey
and his take on reviews
An interesting way to support a friend. Well done, Buck
Comment Written 03-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Thanks Buck. have seen some of similar views from others of us and I do plan on checking the Forum as I said earlier to put a spanner in the works or something. Mikey (Michael Cahill) and myself seem to have a lot of commonality. He is a Muso so am I he is a Tangent man so am I. Planning a saceond verse now I know how his last name is pronounced "Up Over" as it is Different 'Down Under"
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other verses now added I think the colour arrangement as gone sorry.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
Fun and humor at fine display...lol! Your title is heavily colored with humor. Fun done with rhymes, nice delicacy different from our usual brain-cracking posts.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
Fun and humor at fine display...lol! Your title is heavily colored with humor. Fun done with rhymes, nice delicacy different from our usual brain-cracking posts.
ola thomas
Comment Written 03-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Thanks Friend. Have seen your stuff around pretty sure. Hoping to do a second verse now I know how Michael Cahill pronounces his last name (Different here in Australia)
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other verses now added I think the colour arrangement as gone sorry.