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Comment from MagKing
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Indeed you're very right in your sayings.
Life is a teacher; probably the best teacher or as they say experience. But life puts you through that experience and makes it possible.
A fine one from you!

MagKing

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 07-Aug-2014
    Thank you NagKing
Comment from rod007
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On the surface this poem seems very basic, but it is deeper than that. To me the poem depicts the twists and turns in life's journey and that we must be wary and heed God's Signs in that voyage. Well done, Tom.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
    Thank you rod.
Comment from sunnilicious
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That road sign was not on my DMV exam, however, I know what it means. Great poem. Nice wisdom kindly bestowed. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Great work.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
    Thank you Alicia. Love the stars.
Comment from Angel Debbie
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Life has many twists and turns
And any survivor learns to read the important signs of life.
Yet I see many young ones who have no fear in life and don't care about reading signs.
Great write. Love the picture too.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
    Thank you Angel Debbie
Comment from Capricorn30
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A lovely bed of flowers--this small garden makes it easy to notice the sign;
Reading signs along the way, imperative both on roads and through life's journey.
We all desire safe, easy options along both paths.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
    Thank you Margaret. Its interesting that one of my other reviewers said they were definitely glad for the sign. Otherwise in England or Austrailia, they go the other side.
Comment from Joan E.
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Thank you again for being inspired by the scene and sharing the photograph plus introducing the 7X7 form. I admired your addition of rhymed couples plus! Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2014
    Thank you Joan. Happy travels!
reply by Joan E. on 02-Aug-2014
    Pura vida- Joan
Comment from Trybuck
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Living life we will learn
To watch closely
For unexpected turns

Thanks for the author's notes explaining the sign. Well done, Buck

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2014
    Thank you trybuck. Lije you associated rhyming review.
Comment from Charlene0513
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A worthy and wise expression as many people are too much in a hurry and forget that others are using the highway and have just as important places to go to as they do.
Charlene

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2014
    Thank you Charkene.
Comment from tfawcus
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I enjoyed reading this poem, Tom, and it brought a smile to my lips for here in Australia we would have gone round this particular obstacle anti-clockwise and met our doom without the guiding signpost! Perhaps this is an apt metaphor for the misunderstandings between nations that sometimes lead to head-on clashes!

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2014
    Thank you tfawcus. You make a very good point.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is very well written, treischel, you did an excellent job writing this 7 x 7 poem, thanks for the author notes explaining the concept. I enjoyed reading this one..

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2014


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2014
    Thank you sweetwoodjax.