A Lovely Day
This describes someone walking after having a wonderful day.2 total reviews
Comment from lakeport
A loney day, indeed that's a lovely expressed 5/7/5 poem.
I enjoyed reading it. Good luck at the contest, God bless you. lakeport.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2014
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A loney day, indeed that's a lovely expressed 5/7/5 poem.
I enjoyed reading it. Good luck at the contest, God bless you. lakeport.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2014
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Thank you! If you are entering a contest, good luck to you too!
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your welcome.lakeport.
Comment from Drew Delaney
This is a great contender for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest. But please don't hide your smiles. They are contagious and I'd much rather see a smile then tears running down someone's cheeks. Nice work!
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2014
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This is a great contender for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest. But please don't hide your smiles. They are contagious and I'd much rather see a smile then tears running down someone's cheeks. Nice work!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2014
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Thanks for the feedback! Really helpful. Usually, I write more cheerful poems, but that day I was feeling slightly gloomy. Glad you liked it though!
