Expressing Myself
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Holding Back the Tears"Writing my way out of depression / mental illness
10 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
what a grotesquely funny picture LOL
Your picture is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
good alliterative grouping in Baboon/blushing/bride
I love what the "blushing flower" is LOL
Brooke
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2014
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what a grotesquely funny picture LOL
Your picture is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
good alliterative grouping in Baboon/blushing/bride
I love what the "blushing flower" is LOL
Brooke
Comment Written 17-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2014
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Thank you Brooke, I'm glad you got a kick out of this one!
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A cute 5-7-5, but should have been posted under poetry. I love the artwork. An enjoyable read and I wish you the best in the contest. This is a good entry, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2014
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A cute 5-7-5, but should have been posted under poetry. I love the artwork. An enjoyable read and I wish you the best in the contest. This is a good entry, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 17-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2014
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Thank you Debbie! The computer would not let me do it in poetry format for some reason. Thank you for your encouragement!
Comment from Louise Michelle
Oh, God, I think I'm going to upchuck the scrambled eggs I just ate. You chose terrific words to go with that disgusting picture, lol. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2014
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Oh, God, I think I'm going to upchuck the scrambled eggs I just ate. You chose terrific words to go with that disgusting picture, lol. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 17-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2014
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Thank you Lou, a mighty fine compliment.. So glad you got a kick out of this one!!
Comment from Green Lake Girl
OMG!! This is over-the-top funny. What a photo; blushing flower, indeed. Now THAT'S a landing strip! You have my vote in this contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2014
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OMG!! This is over-the-top funny. What a photo; blushing flower, indeed. Now THAT'S a landing strip! You have my vote in this contest.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2014
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So glad you got a kick out of this one!! Thank you Green Lake Girl!!
Comment from Delahay
That is so funny. I love the picture you chose to accompany this. It really sets off what you have written. I think the 'blushing bride' may surprise her 'groom'.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2014
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That is so funny. I love the picture you chose to accompany this. It really sets off what you have written. I think the 'blushing bride' may surprise her 'groom'.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much WardHays, for this kind and encouraging review!!
Comment from Leineco
Oh my! I wonder it that's what Sir Elwin expected when the veil was lifted?!?!?! LOL
I like your skewed take on the prompt - twisted and funny :-)
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2014
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Oh my! I wonder it that's what Sir Elwin expected when the veil was lifted?!?!?! LOL
I like your skewed take on the prompt - twisted and funny :-)
Comment Written 16-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2014
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Thank you Leineco, for your kind and encouraging review! (I am twisted, that's for sure... LOL!
Comment from Dean Kuch
A-H-H-H-h-h-h-h-i-i-i-i-e-e-e-e! For the love of God, please tell her to put that thing away! Man, she's an animal, I'd almost bet you money on it. But not funny money, my coffers are low as it is.
Truly...shocking entry, but so damn funny, too! Heh-heh...
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2014
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A-H-H-H-h-h-h-h-i-i-i-i-e-e-e-e! For the love of God, please tell her to put that thing away! Man, she's an animal, I'd almost bet you money on it. But not funny money, my coffers are low as it is.
Truly...shocking entry, but so damn funny, too! Heh-heh...
Comment Written 16-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2014
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So glad you got a reaction from this poem (and picture)! This review gave me a laugh... Thank you!! But I don't understand the part where you say 'but not funny money, my coffers are low as it is'. Thank you so much for this review and the generous stars!!
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You know... funny money? That's the fake member dollars we build up that we're awarded for reading posts? At least, I sincerely hope you're being rewarded for reading posts. If not, you're being cheated, LOL.
Comment from RYME4U
This one is hysterical! What else can I say. The baboon facing us wants to get to the bottom of things quickly, doesn't he?
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014
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This one is hysterical! What else can I say. The baboon facing us wants to get to the bottom of things quickly, doesn't he?
Comment Written 15-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014
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I wanted to fit 'bottoms up' in there somewhere, but couldn't. thank you so much for your kind and humorous review!!
Comment from Eric1
This is an hilarious offering for this competition, it has every thing needed, great words to go with a fantastically funny picture, Good Luck!
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014
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This is an hilarious offering for this competition, it has every thing needed, great words to go with a fantastically funny picture, Good Luck!
Comment Written 15-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much Eric1, for this kind and encouraging review!
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You are so welcome my friend.
Comment from rjuselius
"Sir Elwin Baboon
Your blushing flower awaits,
You may kiss the bride"
haha. lmao. i just nearly chocked of laughter! this is a nice one and the picture is hilarious!
thank you for making my morning! you've got my vote!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014
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"Sir Elwin Baboon
Your blushing flower awaits,
You may kiss the bride"
haha. lmao. i just nearly chocked of laughter! this is a nice one and the picture is hilarious!
thank you for making my morning! you've got my vote!
rebekka x
Comment Written 15-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014
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Thank you rebekka! I'm glad you got a kick out of it!! Thank you so much for the six stars!!!!