Comment from Cin

Excellent

Beautiful imagery in your poem - there is something magic about the night time sky full of stars. Your words 'midnight-palette brushes silver upon my soul' is only bested by the effect it has on scattering the soul's darkness - 'like some dandelion adrift in soft wind.' Asomatous!

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014

Thanks for this thoughtful review, Cin. Night time is truly magical. :)

Comment from rrabinow

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poem. Great job with your nonet poem. I feel that your poem flowed nicely from start to finish. I also feel that you picked a great picture to go along with it. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014

Thanks for the review. :)

reply by rrabinow on 15-Jul-2014

You are welcome.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

This is a wonderfully composed nonet, Mystery Poet, and the message within your lines is spiritually uplifting and superbly executed. Well, execution is probably not the best word to use in this case, but you pulled it off brilliantly. Our inner beauty is far more important than what others see on the outside. And each one of us are unique, and wonderfully created, with our own likes and dislikes.

Again, well done, and I wish you the best of luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Dean. I appreciate your thoughtful comments. So pleased you enjoyed this. :)

reply by Dean Kuch on 15-Jul-2014

Sure, Anupam. Anytime.

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

An unusual image here. I can visualize it happening. Wonderful use of assonance with glow and soul; skyline, like and dandelion. Alliteration with the "s" sound works well in this dreamy metaphor.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014

Thanks a lot for this lovely review. Glad you liked it. Enjoy the day! :)

Comment from prefabmouse

Excellent

You did a really good job sticking to the format set forth in this contest.

I loved your work. Your use of the proper words explains it well.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014

Thanks for the review. :)

Comment from angelface2

Excellent

Very good Nonet poem. All count is correct. The picture is perfect in giving the imagery you described. Very nicely done. Miss Sally

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014

Thanks for the review.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Beautiful beautiful beautiful...I loved the .......sanctified eyes....shimmer with
Inner .......stars....It rolls off the tongue like a song...I think I love eyes best of all......beautiful...good luck with the contest
God bless

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Jul-2014

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Comment from lakeport

Excellent

Midnights magic. indeed that's a very lovely expressed poem,
nice in form. I enjoyed reading it. Good luck at the contest. God bless you. lakeport.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Have you given 4 stars by mistake? If not, I would like to know what's the issue for lower rating.

reply by lakeport on 14-Jul-2014

thank you, yes I have given four stars by mistake, I will correct it.lakeport

reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014

I appreciate it.

reply by lakeport on 14-Jul-2014

your welcome,lakeport,

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

This is filled with great imagery and written in perfect nonet form having the correct syllable count. Good luck to you.
Teresa

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014

Thanks for the review. :)

Comment from deepwater

Excellent

palette brushes silver
glow upon my soul, the darkness
within scatters through skyline--
like some dandelion
adrift in soft wind.
Sanctified eyes
has a nice ring to it good art work

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014

Thanks for reading. :)