Aiona's Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Conal"Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.
2 total reviews
Comment from Misrael
I am not sure how to rate and review this as it does not make a lot of sense to me. But one thing I am sure of is that it is about two lovers. If my guess is right. Keep on writing and keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014
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I am not sure how to rate and review this as it does not make a lot of sense to me. But one thing I am sure of is that it is about two lovers. If my guess is right. Keep on writing and keep up the good work.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014
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Thanks, Misrael. It is about lovers, indeed. :)
Comment from Pyrrho
A photon, I believe, is a light particle so I assume your first line is playing on and associating the blessing of light with your Kiwi lover's smile, and I trust that the falls to which you refer have great beauty. is so, then so does your poem and I acknowledge thet.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014
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A photon, I believe, is a light particle so I assume your first line is playing on and associating the blessing of light with your Kiwi lover's smile, and I trust that the falls to which you refer have great beauty. is so, then so does your poem and I acknowledge thet.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014
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Thank you. Yes, a photon is indeed light.