Comment from Treischel

Excellent

A lovely and creative 3-5-3 formatted poem. It has wonderful alliteration and colorful poetic imagery ( pulls pollinators, borders buzz). Both visual and descriptive.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014

Thank you so much Treischel for your lovely feedback. Kindest regards, Debra :)

Comment from mauial

Excellent

Great use of alliteration with pull pollinators, borders buzz. I also love the imagery that your words impart in the entire poem.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014

Thank you so much mauial for your lovely feedback. Kindest regards, Debra :)

Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

good luck in the contest

your syllable count spot on

good visual to portray message in few words

yes wildflower bring out the bees to do their work

flows well

cheers Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014

Thank you so much SC for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards, Debra :)

reply by Smoothiecool on 13-Jul-2014

most welcome..SC >. Faye

Comment from Capricorn30

Excellent

A well-crafted alliterative poem; great creativity;
Nice visual and audio imagery to complement a colorful vision of summer--one of many.
Your chosen artwork is lovely.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014

Thank you so much Capricorn30 for your lovely feedback. Kindest regards, Debra :)

Comment from Christopher Lones

Excellent

A very good short poem. Hope you do good with the contest. Even if you don't win, you still created a solid poem. That in itself is success.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014

Thank you so much Christopher for your lovely feedback. Kindest regards, Debra :)

Comment from Val Crisson

Excellent

Nice use of alliteration in this little haiku or poem. I love the subject of bees and pollination, and since this is a nature contest I believe this works well. Lovely and very timely.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014

Thank you so much Val for your lovely feedback. Kindest regards as always, Debra :)

Comment from Dawny53

Excellent

Witty, sweet,cute, funny, lovely, and fun to read! Good luck in the contest, and your garden is very pleasing to the eye

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014

Thank you so much Dawny for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes! Kindest regards, Debra :)

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This is a lovely 3-5-3 nature poem, beautifully accentuated by the picture of your own flower garden as it stands this very day. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014

Thank you so much Jeanie for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. Kindest regards, Debra :)

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Nostrums are good borders. Wish I had some bees or butterflies to pollinate my fruit orchard. Blessings to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014

Thank you so much Ben for your lovely feedback. Kindest regards, Debra :)

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi,

Beautiful photo, and you've formatted this well, making it feel spring/summery.

Good luck in the contest.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014

Thank you so much Jax for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. Kindest regards, Debra :)