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Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "She's The Only One For Me."
A book of Stories, Essays and Poetry.

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Comment from seaglass
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My husband and I have had this same picture taken except he is sitting and I am standing in ours. they're such fun. I wonder if someday people will have pictures made dresses as we do today? Another sett poem and it goes well with the picture.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
    Thanks friend. Glad you enjoyed. The music is coming.Got a upgrade to my Encore programme recently. Turns out the old version was the thing that was causing all the computer crashes. I asked the supplier about the old version and Windows 7 and he said old version would not work properly in W 7 hence the multitude of crashes I was getting on the new puter. SO nice to have smoother running now. Only thing is my music programme is dependent on me having a good hearing day ho hum.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
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Comment from Gladness
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Great picture her too. Endearing lines, and truthful too, he he. What couple does not at times drive each other nuts? It is heart warming to hear the steadfastness in the line, "She's the only on for me."
Anita

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
    Thanks friend for the lovely words.
    Got a upgrade to my Encore programme recently. Turns out the old version was the thing that was causing all the computer crashes. I asked the supplier about the old version and Windows 7 and he said old version would not work properly in W 7 hence the multitude of crashes I was getting on the new puter. SO nice to have smoother running now. Only thing is my music programme is dependent on me having a good hearing day ho hum.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
    Music now on! And Changed last line in Second to sync with last line of first verse
Comment from GWinterwin
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Another good poem with words to tell of your love for one another. Good word flow and rhyming as you tell of your love for each other.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
    Music is com9ng mate. Got a upgrade to my Encore programme recently. Turns out the old version was the thing that was causing all the computer crashes. I asked the supplier about the old version and Windows 7 and he said old version would not work properly in W 7 hence the multitude of crashes I was getting on the new puter. SO nice to have smoother running now. Only thing is my music programme is dependent on me having a good hearing day ho hum. Thanks for the great review.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
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Comment from c_lucas
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Time usually solidify a couple into a single being. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
    AMEn my friend the bible says we are to become one flesh and over these 27 plus years God has done that for us. Louise puts up with a lot believe me.
    Thanks again.
reply by c_lucas on 01-Jul-2014
    Be thankful the rolling pin is out of style, Geoff.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
    Hey I have an Irish one we got from Cooma Jail down south of us. Forget if I have a e-maiol for you or actually there is a picture of it on my Geoffossary end of my book...it is SQUARE! HEHE!!
reply by c_lucas on 01-Jul-2014
    You have my email address, Geoff. Charlie
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
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Comment from Antoine Charlemaine
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You're really on a roll, Sankey. This reminds me of Pooh Bear, believe it or not, at least A A Milne's rhyming style.
Love the line, 'We drive each other nuts'.
Is that a photo of you and yours? Looks like you may have been at Sovereign Hill at some time?
Anthony

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
    We wanted to go to Sovereign hill mate but all the gravel and stuff would have made it too hard to get her around in her wheelchair. The photo was taken at Australiana Village in Wilberforce, a year after we married. I call it our Great Grandparents hehe. Thanks for the lovely review.
reply by Antoine Charlemaine on 01-Jul-2014
    Australiana Village! Gosh, I went there as a young boy of six or seven! Traveled down from the Blue Mountains where I lived at the time. I bet that's not there any more!
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
    It is still there one of the guys on Old Sydney or something said so he was not sure the Vintage photo studio was though.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
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Comment from michaelcahill
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Another song in the making. Great photo! I didn't know you two were royalty! I can see why your smiling... what is she smiling about? Hahaha!!! Good one. You're on a roll. Keep em coming.

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
    Thanks mate music coming soon. Appreciate you dropping by.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
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Comment from kiwisteveh
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Your honeybun and you
are lovers, that is true,
and you're the only one for her

Hold on to what you've got;
you'd better tie the knot
cos you're the only one for her.


Steve

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 Comment Written 01-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
    Hey! We bin married for almost 27.5 years mate! Thanks for the review and the nice poem.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
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Comment from CR Delport
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Sharing your life with someone is truly great. After a while you get to know each other so well, and have so many inside jokes. This is another well done piece.

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 Comment Written 01-Jul-2014


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
    Thanks mate. Tune coming for this ope too, real soon ok!
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
    Music now on! And Changed last line in Second to sync with last line of first verse