Geoffrey's Musings.
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Bug, Hug, Lug."A book of Stories, Essays and Poetry.
28 total reviews
Comment from ravenblack
May you two remain two bug and lug snug in a rug together. I dug your hug, no shrugs here from your use of pet names. I can tell you have a lot of affection for each-other.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
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May you two remain two bug and lug snug in a rug together. I dug your hug, no shrugs here from your use of pet names. I can tell you have a lot of affection for each-other.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
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Hi friend appreciate the great review. Hope you heard the music
Comment from tfawcus
A whimsical and intimate piece of writing. I suggest capital letters for Bug and Lug to emphasise the fact that they are pet names. As it is, the poem depends overmuch on the author note for explanation.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
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A whimsical and intimate piece of writing. I suggest capital letters for Bug and Lug to emphasise the fact that they are pet names. As it is, the poem depends overmuch on the author note for explanation.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
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Thanks for the advice will work on your suggestions appreciate the great review hope you heard the music.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
Good work. a poetic craft done in simple but enchanting manner. I love the brevity of this work without losing its tune.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
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Good work. a poetic craft done in simple but enchanting manner. I love the brevity of this work without losing its tune.
ola thomas
Comment Written 04-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
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Hi Ola don't think we have met before. I gather you picked up the music as well. Thanks for the review.
Comment from Ekim777
Everybody loves a pair of lovers and the 'meaningful things they say. Is nor love eternally refreshing but is it something eternal?There is something infinite about its magic but is love something infinite. Now why is this magic state, something we all cherish, why is it so exclusive? Why can't we share something of it? Why do lovers feel that it is we two against the world?
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
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Everybody loves a pair of lovers and the 'meaningful things they say. Is nor love eternally refreshing but is it something eternal?There is something infinite about its magic but is love something infinite. Now why is this magic state, something we all cherish, why is it so exclusive? Why can't we share something of it? Why do lovers feel that it is we two against the world?
Comment Written 04-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
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Hi friend if you read my autobiography some of your questions would be answered. I appreciate your fine review. Thanks very much and I hope you heard the music as well.
Comment from Dawn Munro
What an adorable poem! Simple declaration of the kind of comfortable love shared by two who know their place in the world is with the other. Heartwarming!
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
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What an adorable poem! Simple declaration of the kind of comfortable love shared by two who know their place in the world is with the other. Heartwarming!
Comment Written 04-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
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Hi Dawn I hope you might read my book I am working on called "The Little Dog That Wouldn't let Go" It is an autobiography and lots in there about meeting my sweetheart and all that. Been together for nearly 27.5 years now. Thanks again.
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It sounds very appealing but I am so far behind in everything right now, I'm not sure I can take on another book to follow - I have over 400 authors I am trying to follow, and feel I am letting down so many! Sorry. I simply can't promise. Thank you for the invite, though - I will try. :)
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Hey I understand in short my wife has cerebral palsy and we met due to a hearing impaired group I started at the hospital where we both worked I just figured out your member name what a beaudy! I have had to cut back on my reviewing too so understood.
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Thank you for your most gracious reply - I will try, though...:)
Comment from Delahay
I could not get the background music to load and I didn't understand the author notes. The poem is cute, the terms you used are obvious pet terms of endearment.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
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I could not get the background music to load and I didn't understand the author notes. The poem is cute, the terms you used are obvious pet terms of endearment.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014
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Sorry Ward are you on Apple Mac? You might need the other player to get it. Should work on Windows Media player I did have trouble getting it over had to convert from a Midi file to MP3 to get it working on FS sorry. Thanks a lot for the review. Sorry if Author no0tes a bit confusing.
Comment from AnnieGale
Another sweet and endearing poem and I certainly understood the, "lug" and "bug"...your each others love bug...Just a cute little poem and I'm sure with a tune it will be very cute...very sweet
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2014
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Another sweet and endearing poem and I certainly understood the, "lug" and "bug"...your each others love bug...Just a cute little poem and I'm sure with a tune it will be very cute...very sweet
Comment Written 03-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2014
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Hi Annie thanks heaps I already have the tune in my head just need to get the Midi file made after it is written up on the Music programme ha!
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Music now on! And Changed last line in Second to sync with last line of first verse
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Oops sorr disregard the changed the line thing that was for the other poem
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Majestic sunset. Lug and bug ... that rhymes. Funny nicknames. Nice job, I love this photo. See---you double spaced. Easy to read, good poem. wackydo, do loco
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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Majestic sunset. Lug and bug ... that rhymes. Funny nicknames. Nice job, I love this photo. See---you double spaced. Easy to read, good poem. wackydo, do loco
Comment Written 02-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2014
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Thanks mate getting back to your stuff soon. Will check the error and fix.
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I wasn't an error.
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Music now on!
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Happy Fourth!
Comment from DanielEkine
A pleasant rhyme.
"hug/lug/does/other/smother/other/two."
A defined piece of writing. Great presentation.
Bug Lug - My wife to myself.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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A pleasant rhyme.
"hug/lug/does/other/smother/other/two."
A defined piece of writing. Great presentation.
Bug Lug - My wife to myself.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Thanks mate music is coming soon on a better hearing day which today is not!! Bleah!
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Music now on!
Comment from judiverse
Charmingly done. Excellent rhyme, and it flows well. I like the language used, and the word "lug" fits in nicely. A wonderful way of showing the love between the two of you--kisses and hugs. Sometimes they can say more than words. Interesting title. judi
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Charmingly done. Excellent rhyme, and it flows well. I like the language used, and the word "lug" fits in nicely. A wonderful way of showing the love between the two of you--kisses and hugs. Sometimes they can say more than words. Interesting title. judi
Comment Written 01-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2014
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Thanks friend music is coming. Got a upgrade to my Encore programme recently. Turns out the old version was the thing that was causing all the computer crashes. I asked the supplier about the old version and Windows 7 and he said old version would not work properly in W 7 hence the multitude of crashes I was getting on the new puter. SO nice to have smoother running now. Only thing is my music programme is dependent on me having a good hearing day ho hum. We do have other nicknames for each other as well.
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You're so welcome. Very sweet sentiments you express in this poem. judi
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Music now on!
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You're so welcome. judi
