Comment from butchcates

Excellent

Good work, mate. Love the picture as well. Would love to visit your part of the world of the Lord ever enables us to do so.
Your love for you "bug" is eventide in your writings.
May God continue to give you inspiration.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014

Well Bro if we don't we will just have to see each other in Glory huh! Thanks for the review Chpaters of my Biography are gettimg moved around a bit especially have deleted chapters 4 and five for some extra work atm. had a lovely Sis in the Lord who I taught briefly when she was 8 now a Mum of four give me some advice about some over loaded info in some chapters so moving stuff around a bit.Lord Bless

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Oh this is lovely. You are Lug and your wife if Bug (does she know LOL) - My Bug loves a Hug - that is so sweet. A nice flow to this poem and I feel it should be sung. Kind regards Dorothy

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014

Hi Dorothy. Hope you picked up the music Windows Media should pick it up. If you are a Apple/ Mac user you will need their alternative player programme. Thanks for the lovely review. I am doing some editing of my Autobiography atm I think we have met before but have a loo9k at "The Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go" if you have the time.

Comment from thedreampeddler

Exceptional

This is a fantastic poem. I am going to throw you a six star here. I would appreciate it if you would see if one of my works are as deserving,(The History of Life). If you don't find it worthy, I greatly respect that.
Anyway, wonderful poem.

thedreampeddler

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014

Thanks dreampeddler. Would love to check out your stuff. We all help each other in here. Appreciate the review hope you heard the music ok. Be looking for yours later. Windows Media player or Apple Mac's alternative player should pick it up. Thanks aga8in. Check my Autobiography if you get time too "The Little Dog That Wouldn't let Go."

Comment from Acquired Taste

Excellent

Not fussy, not flowery, not overwritten - the simple earnest words of a man that loves his wife.

I really enjoyed this. And the sunset photo is so right!

AT=/

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014

Great thanks for that. We get Sunrise on the back and Sunset at the front, of course. Appreciate the review hope you heard the music.

reply by Acquired Taste on 06-Jul-2014

will try tomorrow on my other machine. sound is non existent on this one! enjoy the sunrise...AT=/

reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014

Hi if using a Mac or Apple have to find their alternate Player otherwise the latest Windows Media Player should work. Cheers.

Comment from rrabinow

Excellent

I like they rhyming that you used. And it shows how much hugs are loved and why they are loved. And I can relate to it as well.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2014

Thanks new friend have not seen you around before. Will try and look at your stuff. Hope you heard the music let me know if not.

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

Life is all about loving one another and being kind. Well chosen words and rhyming to convey your thoughts. Enjoyable read. Faye

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014

Hi Faye thanks for the lovely review hope you liked the music.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Excellent, Sankey, and the musical accompaniment was the perfect choice. I like the lighthearted, frivolous nature of the meter ad cadence of the verse. It so befits the inspirational theme of love you project for your Bug.

Well done, I truly enjoyed the presentation!

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014

Thanks very much for as great review. Glad the music came through some are having trouble. I hade to convert the Midi file to MP3 to get it to work properly.

reply by Dean Kuch on 05-Jul-2014

It came through just fine for me, Sankey. It's really nice to know that there is still true love out there in our world someplace. Your poem demonstrates that simply, yet beautifully.

You're very welcome, my friend.

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

A beautifully unashamedly sentimental massage for your wife whom you obviously adore to the moon and back, you can't beat hugs, they speak volumes as does your wonderful poem.

 Comment Written 05-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014

Thanks Eric for the lovely review. I do hope you were able to pick up the music. Thanks again.

Comment from Dawny53

Excellent

our wife is a very lucky woman to have a husband who is so sentimental. Reading your work makes me wish my husband would give me a hug! Really a different style, I liked it.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014

Hi Dawny thanks for the review. We are both huggers we waited 25 years to find each other or she sis I was waiting for 34 years. Ha! Ho0e you heard the music there might be more verses to it later hope you look at the other one or maybe you did already.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi,

Fun little poem with get sentiment for your wife. Really a nice dedication to her and your relationship.

Nicely done.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2014

Thanks Jax another new friend hope you heard the music Appreciate the review thanks.