Expressing Myself
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Bright Lights, Big City"Writing my way out of depression / mental illness
5 total reviews
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I love the poem. Lisping makes it hard to communicate. Some other people often react badly to one who lisps. Lisping does not mean one is stupid. It just means you have a hard time talking. Great work.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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I love the picture. I love the poem. Lisping makes it hard to communicate. Some other people often react badly to one who lisps. Lisping does not mean one is stupid. It just means you have a hard time talking. Great work.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
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I guess there are a few things worse than having a lisp.. I think it's cute myself. I think the reason that the character had a spelling problem was because her pa didn't let her go to school. Thank you so much for your review!!
Comment from BCScot
I really enjoyed this piece once I read it out loud it was easier to understand! Great choice in art work too, I can just see her plotting to get away from her chores. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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I really enjoyed this piece once I read it out loud it was easier to understand! Great choice in art work too, I can just see her plotting to get away from her chores. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 27-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging review!
Comment from adewpearl
I just love the way you achieve the effect of the lisping child narrator
off to Vegas LOL
This is clever and hilarious :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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I just love the way you achieve the effect of the lisping child narrator
off to Vegas LOL
This is clever and hilarious :-) Brooke
Comment Written 27-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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Thank you Brooke, so glad you could decode my little poem and that you liked it too!
Comment from Cybertron1986
HILARIOUS! This poem had me laughing from start to finish. The use of purposely misspelled words that emphasize "imperfection," along with a comical theme and choice of words was genius!
It had me going from start to finish as I was deciphering what you were expressing through the misspelled words.
A great poem to start the day!
THANK YOU! I want to share this with my friends. Well done!!!
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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HILARIOUS! This poem had me laughing from start to finish. The use of purposely misspelled words that emphasize "imperfection," along with a comical theme and choice of words was genius!
It had me going from start to finish as I was deciphering what you were expressing through the misspelled words.
A great poem to start the day!
THANK YOU! I want to share this with my friends. Well done!!!
Comment Written 27-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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Hello bluerain1328, Wow, YOU made my day. I am so pleased that you liked my poem!!! Thank you so much for this generous, kind and encouraging review! and thank you for taking the time to decode the words! Have a wonderful day!!!
Comment from Eric1
And I do wish you luck with this hilarious take on a poor lass living with her overbearing father who uses her as a slave, not only that, the poor girl has a terrible lipth, Great!
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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And I do wish you luck with this hilarious take on a poor lass living with her overbearing father who uses her as a slave, not only that, the poor girl has a terrible lipth, Great!
Comment Written 27-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much Eric1, for your insightful and kind review!!