Geoffrey's Musings.
Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "Howard* You Like it? "A book of Stories, Essays and Poetry.
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Comment from DanielEkine
Oh no! Howard didn't like it. The chili pepper in the fat has burned his ass 'red hot.'
The buddies and their fishing. Very-well directed and played out. Very normal and exciting. Great job by the author. The artwork is well-chosen.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Oh no! Howard didn't like it. The chili pepper in the fat has burned his ass 'red hot.'
The buddies and their fishing. Very-well directed and played out. Very normal and exciting. Great job by the author. The artwork is well-chosen.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Thanks mate the lovely widow of the gentleman now gone to Glory is gonna join us here on FS so hopefully you will get ro read some more of her interesting stories! Appreciate the fine review thanks.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Holy Habaneros, Sankey! Now that's gotta' sting! At first, I thought you were referring to, ah, how do I put this delicately -- some other< extremity.
Hopefully, Howard and his hemorrhoids have fully recovered by now. Having that particular affliction, it couldn't have felt too great on it's way out after digestion, either.
Funny stuff!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Holy Habaneros, Sankey! Now that's gotta' sting! At first, I thought you were referring to, ah, how do I put this delicately -- some other< extremity.
Hopefully, Howard and his hemorrhoids have fully recovered by now. Having that particular affliction, it couldn't have felt too great on it's way out after digestion, either.
Funny stuff!
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Hi Dean you are funny mate. I have managed to get Howard or Junior as we knew him's widow to come join us here on FS so hopefully she will have some other interesting stories to share later on. He is relieved now mate home in Glory! Thanks for the top review I loved it!
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My pleasure, Sankey, or as you say in the Land down under...No worries, mate!
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Hi Dean the saying has become acceptable all over I think it started in our Southern State of Victoria. hehe!
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The Crocodile Hunter Nature show, with the late Steve Irwin, and the movie, Crocodile Dundee made the phrase popular here in the States, Sankey.
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Ok great and he wasn't Victorian either he was a painter and Docker before he came to fame as an actor painting our Harbour Bridge would you believe.
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Huh, I never would have guessed that!
Comment from judiverse
This is funny, and the kind of story that gets told over and over. Poor Howard must have had a hard time living that one down. I wouldn't have thought of using chili pepper to season the fish. Apparently Howard hadn't considered that possibility either. Interesting tale and excellent narrative style. You might try a less awkward way of wording "The eating was finished. maybe "The men had finished eating." Good description of Howard's reaction to the chili pepper in the fat. judi
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This is funny, and the kind of story that gets told over and over. Poor Howard must have had a hard time living that one down. I wouldn't have thought of using chili pepper to season the fish. Apparently Howard hadn't considered that possibility either. Interesting tale and excellent narrative style. You might try a less awkward way of wording "The eating was finished. maybe "The men had finished eating." Good description of Howard's reaction to the chili pepper in the fat. judi
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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You will meet his widow on here soon she is joining FS You will love Dot I don't know what she will call her self will work on your suggestions later we are out for some physio for Louise thanks again for the review!
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You're welcome. Hope to catch the widow's writing, whatever name she chooses. judi
Comment from seaglass
These are the kind of stories one hopes his mate will never tell. This is a well written flash story of a real event I would never had thought of using the fat but would have ran for the river anyway.
I know a guy that tried BenGay for jock itch and ended up in the hospital.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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These are the kind of stories one hopes his mate will never tell. This is a well written flash story of a real event I would never had thought of using the fat but would have ran for the river anyway.
I know a guy that tried BenGay for jock itch and ended up in the hospital.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Don't know Ben gay I have a Dermatitis cream I use for that and it is good just have to not do it too often as it is the stronger percentage of chemical ahhhh! Pardon the frankness you being a lady and all hehe. Dorothy was talking about the story with us on Face book only yesterday. have been Online friends with her and her late husband (Junior was his nickname) for years. She had a lovely photo of him in a Confederate Officers Uniform. Really nice. Of course he wasn't around back then hehe. Thanks for the great review
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BenGay is an American medicated cream that is supposed to be used for sore muscles. It has a peppery, burning feel to the skin. Not intended for tender, sensitive areas.
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Right like Dencorub with Menthol in it I think! Guessing? OR Voltaren Cream same thing hehe can't get those mixed with the Derma Soft ha!
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After using Bengay, it's advised to wash hands. If you accidently rub your eye, you're in for a day of pain.
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Right fer shore!! I know what you mean!
Comment from royowen
I loved it Geoff! What a splott. My eyes started to water the second I read your short excerpt! This was very funny, very well written and described! This has to be one of funniest things I've read for sometime! Well done, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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I loved it Geoff! What a splott. My eyes started to water the second I read your short excerpt! This was very funny, very well written and described! This has to be one of funniest things I've read for sometime! Well done, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Thanks mate I got a bit mixed on Dialect so I have now removed "stuck' as I had already mentioned chow down which is Yankee or Rebel of course. Glad you enjoyed it we all laughed hen Dot our Sis in the Lord told us about it initially. Dear Howard or Junior as he was known is now with the Lord.
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I'm sorry Geoff, I didn't think it was an actual person! Blessing, bro.
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bro I will tell you about Junior and Dot later Dot is joining FS so you will see her stuff later she is a very senior cit ok! gotta go Lord Bless
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I look forward to it Geoff. Thanks bro.
Comment from ElegantButler
Good old angler tales. How wonderfully amusing they tend to be. From The One That Got Away to the Wife's Tale, no pastime has tales more amusing than fishing. Thanks for sharing this one.
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Good old angler tales. How wonderfully amusing they tend to be. From The One That Got Away to the Wife's Tale, no pastime has tales more amusing than fishing. Thanks for sharing this one.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Thanks friend I did get the Uncle Sam and Aussie Dialect mixed initially so ;stuck' which is Aussie for got into has bee removed appreciate your fine review.
Comment from c_lucas
This is one of those moments, you would prefer had never happened. It is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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This is one of those moments, you would prefer had never happened. It is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Hope you don't mind this is a cut and paste from above but I do appreciate the review... Thanks friend I did get the Uncle Sam and Aussie Dialect mixed initially so ;stuck' which is Aussie for got into has bee removed appreciate your fine review.
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No problem, Geoff. Charlie
Comment from Nosha17
Humorous story of an ill-fated fishing trip. You have made good choice of language in the narrative and descriptions. It read well and was an enjoyable read. Faye
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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Humorous story of an ill-fated fishing trip. You have made good choice of language in the narrative and descriptions. It read well and was an enjoyable read. Faye
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Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Hi Faye a bit of cut and paste if you don't mind here..I appreciate the review thanks...Thanks friend I did get the Uncle Sam and Aussie Dialect mixed initially so 'stuck' which is Aussie for got into has bee removed appreciate your fine review.
Comment from Petriesan
think I'd put a comma after "dinner"
got stuck into it - dialect?
lol. great ending. That would make for a long night
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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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think I'd put a comma after "dinner"
got stuck into it - dialect?
lol. great ending. That would make for a long night
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Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Yeah mate mix of Aussie "stuck into " hehe Thanks for the review will work on the errors. I still remember the laugh we had when Dorothy her hubby told us the story.
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have done the edit and some more that you did not suggest if ya wanna look again.
