Geoffrey's Musings.
Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "Howard* You Like it? "A book of Stories, Essays and Poetry.
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Comment from butchcates
Laughing out loud at this one!!! Poor man and what a shock that had to be for him when the hot spice met his hot bottom. Hope he got the help he needed and got some relief from a painful ccondition.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Laughing out loud at this one!!! Poor man and what a shock that had to be for him when the hot spice met his hot bottom. Hope he got the help he needed and got some relief from a painful ccondition.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Well bro he is in Glory now bless him Terminally ill for a long time hoping his widow might get in here eventually. She has a lot more of these she could share. Thanks for then great review.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a cute and fun to read post. I shared it with my husband and he is still laughing. You did a good job of writing and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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This is a cute and fun to read post. I shared it with my husband and he is still laughing. You did a good job of writing and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Hoping the dear widow of this gentleman will get on FS soon I invited her to come and share some more of her interesting stories. Thanks fore the great review...Hope savannah is not done yet!
Comment from Eric1
What a brilliant story, it reads well and flows like a good wine, I felt sorry For Howard anyway, but when he infused the fat and forgot about the chilli pepper, i lost all sympathy as I laughed.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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What a brilliant story, it reads well and flows like a good wine, I felt sorry For Howard anyway, but when he infused the fat and forgot about the chilli pepper, i lost all sympathy as I laughed.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Well thanks new friend. Hope to get his widow Dot on FS to tell us some more of her great stories soon. Don't think we have met before I have so many friends on FS hard to get around to all your stuff hsha
Comment from Muffins
A genuine funny, laugh out loud story with a classic story ending, save the best for last.
There's only one change I make:"Howard and his buddies had had a good day fishing." I would get rid of the second HAD because the reader knows what you mean and it sound awkward.
Anyway, this was a good piece of writing.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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A genuine funny, laugh out loud story with a classic story ending, save the best for last.
There's only one change I make:"Howard and his buddies had had a good day fishing." I would get rid of the second HAD because the reader knows what you mean and it sound awkward.
Anyway, this was a good piece of writing.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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OK I had haha wondered about that hehe! Will do. Thanks again boy I have had (there it is again :( a heap of great reviews for this. It belongs to Dot the widow of Junior as we all knew him. Hope to get her on FS to share more of her funny stories soon.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
What an eventful and painful fishing trip.
It is quite odd how sometimes we laugh at the embarrassment and pain of others.
I'm sure this is one experience Howard won't forget in a hurry.
Howard he?
Recounted well and I feel deep compassion for him. An assault on this sensitive area with chilli peppered fat surely brought tears to his eyes and
acjte pain.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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What an eventful and painful fishing trip.
It is quite odd how sometimes we laugh at the embarrassment and pain of others.
I'm sure this is one experience Howard won't forget in a hurry.
Howard he?
Recounted well and I feel deep compassion for him. An assault on this sensitive area with chilli peppered fat surely brought tears to his eyes and
acjte pain.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2014
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Sure did mate. Erin might like the laugh too if she gets to read it. Dear Junior as we all knew him (I was an Internet friend of his wife for years and she is now a friend on Face book too) is now in Glory so all his pain is gone. Long story about Junior and Rita and Kate were they the Cyclones they had in La in USA? He was terminally ill for a long time. Anyway thanks and sorry for raving. Junior's widow will be on FS soon to share some more of her funny stories.
Comment from Antoine Charlemaine
Heh, heh, heh. A good ol' Aussie yarn here, my friend! Some of your sentence constructions are a little informal, but they somehow suit the tone of this piece. Perhaps just this: 'It was time for dinner; time to eat some of the prize catch.'
Thanks for the smile, Sankey.
Anthony.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Heh, heh, heh. A good ol' Aussie yarn here, my friend! Some of your sentence constructions are a little informal, but they somehow suit the tone of this piece. Perhaps just this: 'It was time for dinner; time to eat some of the prize catch.'
Thanks for the smile, Sankey.
Anthony.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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thanks mate will look into it. The widow of the gent concerned here is joining FS so I am sure Dot will have a lot more of these interesting stories to share. Not Aussie by the way he was a Redneck ok! I put a story about Energy in Hugs that has been embraced by the FS community if you look around if you have not already seen it ok! Thanks again.
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Thanks mate edit completed if you wanna look again.
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But written by an Aussie in Aussie style...
I have read and commented on Energy in Hugs previously. It was a good read.
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Reads much better now.
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Thanks mate appreciate the input
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Thanks I did think you might have done sorry for the repeat
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No worries!
Comment from adewpearl
A fun story - I guess home remedies aren't always the best. LOL Sounds like the kind of story these men will be telling at campfires and reunions for the rest of their lives :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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A fun story - I guess home remedies aren't always the best. LOL Sounds like the kind of story these men will be telling at campfires and reunions for the rest of their lives :-) Brooke
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Thanks Brooke hoping this gent's widow will be joining us on FS real soon she has a heap of stories to share. Appreciate the review thanks.
Comment from michaelcahill
There's a story with a beginning, middle and END Indeed!! That's too funny... well, for all of us anyway. Oh that had to be the worst. Well, it could have been a cook out in the desert with no lake. That's worse. Great story. Been on the front page all day. Good to see what appeals to this crowd. Hahaha. mikey
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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There's a story with a beginning, middle and END Indeed!! That's too funny... well, for all of us anyway. Oh that had to be the worst. Well, it could have been a cook out in the desert with no lake. That's worse. Great story. Been on the front page all day. Good to see what appeals to this crowd. Hahaha. mikey
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Yeah well I am ticled to death mate the lady whose husband this is all about is coming to FS at my invitation she is gonna join up she has a worth of great stories to share with us. Dear Howard (known as Junior to most of us) is now with the Lord for several years. Every time I watch Pelican Brief (another great John Grisham story he don't do em like this anymore :( ) I think of Dot and Junior who lived for many years near Lake Charles in La where that movie is centered. Thanks for the great review. I hit a nail on the head what!
Comment from CR Delport
Ouch, that can cause some serious damage. I can imagine that would burn like hell. Thanks for sharing this amusing and well written story.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Ouch, that can cause some serious damage. I can imagine that would burn like hell. Thanks for sharing this amusing and well written story.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Yeah his widow when I told her I had put it on here told me another remark he mad when he grabbed the lard as she called it from the pan and his friends wondered why... he said "Grease is Grease" hehe he was to find out the truth later ha! Thabnks for the great review.
Comment from GWinterwin
Good story with a good picture to make it complete. I can feel for old Howard, I have had some problems like that, and it sure isn't funny. Another good job with a short story.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Good story with a good picture to make it complete. I can feel for old Howard, I have had some problems like that, and it sure isn't funny. Another good job with a short story.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Well Bro he has gone to Glory now they all laughed probably after the incident. You will get to meet Junior's as he was known's widow in here soon I managed to get her to join up FS and she has a lot of good stories to tell I can assure you.
Thanks for a great review.
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Thank you my friend, God bless. George
