Comment from LoannaLois

Excellent

Ahh, the writer's poem! We all could have written this one...but we didn't....you did! It's just wonderful and a contender!

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014

Thank you very much, LoannaLois. :)

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I liked the dramatic effect of adding the handwritten version. I enjoyed your use of mono-rhyme as well--hope the "duress" has subsided. Best wishes to us both in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014

Thank you for a delightful review, Joan. Good luck to you as well.

Comment from Capricorn30

Excellent

Sometimes the best poems result from hurried thoughts and stressful situations;
A well-crafted poem--good creativity incorporating a rhyme.
Occasionally we do our best work under pressure.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014

Thank you for a great review, Capricorn.

Comment from Jean Lutz

Excellent

I like the message and the art you created to add emphasis. Sometimes those nuggets turn out to be the best. I hope this is one of those times.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2014

Thank you, Jean, for the kind review.

Comment from michaelcahill

Excellent

Hi! This one jumped out at me. How very clever and so like what runs through our writer minds so very often. I love your artwork which is the original piece. It took me so long to use the computer to write on!! I still don't trust it. I have my shelf full of handwritten pieces dating back to high school. Well, good luck in the contest. This stands out. You have a good chance I think, mikey

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2014

Thank you, Michael. I appreciate your comments and lengthy review.