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Comment from poetbear
Stunningly beautiful.
Would like to morph myself in to that visual right now.
It is prsitine and serene as is every poem you write.
A pleasure to read and review your work!
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Stunningly beautiful.
Would like to morph myself in to that visual right now.
It is prsitine and serene as is every poem you write.
A pleasure to read and review your work!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2014
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Thank you poetbear. You make my day with your encouragement.
Comment from Selina Stambi
An enchanting photo, Tom, and a lovely, lovely sonnet. It works so well as a Pantoum.
Sad that you missed the contest - I would vote for this one.
Hope you had a lovely weekend. I'm back (I hope!).
Sonali
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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An enchanting photo, Tom, and a lovely, lovely sonnet. It works so well as a Pantoum.
Sad that you missed the contest - I would vote for this one.
Hope you had a lovely weekend. I'm back (I hope!).
Sonali
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Thank you Sonali.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Very well expressed and I can see from the image how you were inspired for this poem.
The repeated lines were carefully chosen and very effective within the poem.
This Pantoum sonnet has been carefully crafted and gives a sense of vibrancy and life to the natural wonders of the park.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Very well expressed and I can see from the image how you were inspired for this poem.
The repeated lines were carefully chosen and very effective within the poem.
This Pantoum sonnet has been carefully crafted and gives a sense of vibrancy and life to the natural wonders of the park.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much Shirley.
Comment from RGstar
The rhythm of the repeating line almost cause this write to sing.
The beauty of the lake added to the beauty of the write. Oh how I would give anything to be able to experience such.
Good write, my friend.
Have a great day by that lake. I wish I could join you.
Best wishes,
RG
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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The rhythm of the repeating line almost cause this write to sing.
The beauty of the lake added to the beauty of the write. Oh how I would give anything to be able to experience such.
Good write, my friend.
Have a great day by that lake. I wish I could join you.
Best wishes,
RG
Comment Written 23-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Thank you RG. You'd certainly be welcome.
Comment from sunnilicious
Nice photograph. And a good poem to welcome summer. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Good visual imagery. Creative. Nice work. Have a great week :)
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Nice photograph. And a good poem to welcome summer. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Good visual imagery. Creative. Nice work. Have a great week :)
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Thank you very much for a nice review
Comment from lakeport
A day by the lake, indeed sound like a wonderful place, that's a beautiful expressed Sonnet poem,I enjoyed reading it, God bless you,Lakeport,
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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A day by the lake, indeed sound like a wonderful place, that's a beautiful expressed Sonnet poem,I enjoyed reading it, God bless you,Lakeport,
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Thank you Lameport
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your welcome.lakeport.
Comment from Green Lake Girl
Sorry you missed the contest, but am glad you posted your Pantoum Sonnet anyway. I agree; there is no better way to spend a day then viewing a beautiful body of water. You've captured the mood perfectly. Well done!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Sorry you missed the contest, but am glad you posted your Pantoum Sonnet anyway. I agree; there is no better way to spend a day then viewing a beautiful body of water. You've captured the mood perfectly. Well done!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much Marietta. One of my favorite pastimes.
Comment from MagKing
A fine one from you friend once again!
Am glad that the rating I was supposed to give you in the other poem has a chance on this one.
Beautifully penned down with an all ten syllable in each line.
Sorry about the contest!
MagKing
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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A fine one from you friend once again!
Am glad that the rating I was supposed to give you in the other poem has a chance on this one.
Beautifully penned down with an all ten syllable in each line.
Sorry about the contest!
MagKing
Comment Written 22-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Thank you Mag King. I am so pleased with your review and high rating.
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your delightful day by the lake both with your photograph and your splendid Pantoum Sonnet. I'm sorry you missed the contest because this entry certainly would have been a contender. I enjoyed your "music" metaphor and hope you saw at least one of your avian friends. Happy Sunday- Joan
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Thank you for sharing your delightful day by the lake both with your photograph and your splendid Pantoum Sonnet. I'm sorry you missed the contest because this entry certainly would have been a contender. I enjoyed your "music" metaphor and hope you saw at least one of your avian friends. Happy Sunday- Joan
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Thank you Joan. Lots of tree swallows about.
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Not the big birds of prey like eagles or hawks, but fine feathered friends nonetheless. Smiles- Joan
Comment from rod007
There is such a tranquility and warmth in this piece. It is like one has to do nothing but watch the beauty of the lake. The picture adds to the work in enhancing that sense of enjoyment of nature's wholesomeness. Well done, Tom.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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There is such a tranquility and warmth in this piece. It is like one has to do nothing but watch the beauty of the lake. The picture adds to the work in enhancing that sense of enjoyment of nature's wholesomeness. Well done, Tom.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2014
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Thank you rod. Only thing missing is a fishing pole.
