foolish dog
a dog that ate a hog and then died2 total reviews
Comment from TAB_that's me
This is not a 5-7-5 poem. It should only have 3 line. Yours has 4 lines. It is very difficult to read the light font on the light background.
Teresa
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2014
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This is not a 5-7-5 poem. It should only have 3 line. Yours has 4 lines. It is very difficult to read the light font on the light background.
Teresa
Comment Written 20-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2014
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i don't really care
Comment from Kingsland
once there was a foolish dog
who once ate a hog...
He must have been a fat dog eating all of that hog. you need to change either the background color, or the font color. I had to highlight this to be able to read it. I did like what I read and found it amusing... John
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2014
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once there was a foolish dog
who once ate a hog...
He must have been a fat dog eating all of that hog. you need to change either the background color, or the font color. I had to highlight this to be able to read it. I did like what I read and found it amusing... John
Comment Written 20-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2014
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thank you but i was in a hurry so i did not add the background color or the font color
