Wise old owl
Poetry prompt6 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem is in good 5/7/5 syllable count
Your center line is quite powerful
excellent use of imagery to deliver strong emotion :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2014
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Your poem is in good 5/7/5 syllable count
Your center line is quite powerful
excellent use of imagery to deliver strong emotion :-) Brooke
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2014
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Thanks for this accolade zanya
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
your syllable count spot on
your well chosen few words portrays your image
yes one click and all can be gone
so need to now look at old profile
cheers..Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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good luck in the contest
your syllable count spot on
your well chosen few words portrays your image
yes one click and all can be gone
so need to now look at old profile
cheers..Smoothiecool
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
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most welcome..SC >> Faye
Comment from Jackarrie
Wise old owl no more
Death knell in a google click
Tweak my auld* profile
I guess it could be worse, the owl is clever. Just like your entry into the contest. Good luck. Mary
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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Wise old owl no more
Death knell in a google click
Tweak my auld* profile
I guess it could be worse, the owl is clever. Just like your entry into the contest. Good luck. Mary
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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Thanks for reading and the positive review zanya
Comment from innerworlds
This piece took a while to understand its reference. Very well stated within a small amount of words. I liked the "wise old owl" imagery in association with the current mode of communications. Being from an older generation, modern technology often eludes me... but this one hit home. Very well (and creatively) written. Thank you!!!
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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This piece took a while to understand its reference. Very well stated within a small amount of words. I liked the "wise old owl" imagery in association with the current mode of communications. Being from an older generation, modern technology often eludes me... but this one hit home. Very well (and creatively) written. Thank you!!!
Comment Written 16-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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So glad you enjoyed this - thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from DanielEkine
A remarkable haiku. True words used.
Great choice of diction and presentation.
"Wise old owl no more
Death knell in a google click
Tweak my auld* profile"
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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A remarkable haiku. True words used.
Great choice of diction and presentation.
"Wise old owl no more
Death knell in a google click
Tweak my auld* profile"
Comment Written 15-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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I am simply delighted with this review and accolade - thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Bill Schott
There is a hidden message in here somewhere. I first guess that you have changed your moniker to from wise old owl. My next guess is that I don't know.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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There is a hidden message in here somewhere. I first guess that you have changed your moniker to from wise old owl. My next guess is that I don't know.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2014
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Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya