Writing Prompt Entries 2014
Viewing comments for Chapter 51 "You Know You Want To..."The clue is in the title!
10 total reviews
Comment from seaglass
This made me giggle. What man doesn't find every reason to suggest a toss in the bed. The rhyme and meter are delightful, making this a fun read. The two moods with the same results make it work very well as bookends.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
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This made me giggle. What man doesn't find every reason to suggest a toss in the bed. The rhyme and meter are delightful, making this a fun read. The two moods with the same results make it work very well as bookends.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
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Thank you seaglass for your great feedback, I appreciate it :) Kindest regards...
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hah, well, i can say one thing for certain, your "bloke" is certainly persistent, that's for sure. Never heard it quite put this way before; "rumpy-pumpy", and it conjured up images of a giant-sized egg tipping over and falling off a wall. But that's probably just me, egging you on.
Anyhow, this was very funny, and both poems stand alone and still compliment each other very well.
Good work, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
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Hah, well, i can say one thing for certain, your "bloke" is certainly persistent, that's for sure. Never heard it quite put this way before; "rumpy-pumpy", and it conjured up images of a giant-sized egg tipping over and falling off a wall. But that's probably just me, egging you on.
Anyhow, this was very funny, and both poems stand alone and still compliment each other very well.
Good work, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2014
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Hi Dean :) Thank you for your fun review and good luck wishes, I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)
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Same to you, my friend. You're very welcome.
~DK~
Comment from TAB_that's me
Both of the poems are great and they fit well together in the "bookend". All rules have been followed. Good luck to you in the contest.
teresa
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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Both of the poems are great and they fit well together in the "bookend". All rules have been followed. Good luck to you in the contest.
teresa
Comment Written 13-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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Thank you Teresa for your nice feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)
Comment from victor 66
Both of the poems are great and they fit well together in the "bookend". All rules have been followed. Good luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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Both of the poems are great and they fit well together in the "bookend". All rules have been followed. Good luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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Thank you victor 66 for your great feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)
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You bet. Take care.
Comment from costellsgirl33
I have never heard the expression rumpy-pumpy but I think I am going to start saying that now ;). Your poem is hilarious and I love the picture! lol, nice job
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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I have never heard the expression rumpy-pumpy but I think I am going to start saying that now ;). Your poem is hilarious and I love the picture! lol, nice job
Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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Hi :) Thank you so much for your great feedback... enjoy your new expression ;) I'm glad you enjoyed the poem! Kindest regards...:)
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You are very welcome and thanks for the hilarious poem and making me laugh!
Arnetta
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You are very welcome and thanks for the hilarious poem and making me laugh!
Arnetta
Comment from Leineco
LMAO - Now there's a change of perspective! (If the poem didn't make it clear you were a woman - and if I didn't know who uses rumpy-pumpy LOL - I would have guess this was written by a guy whose viagra just kicked in!)
Very cute entry - good luck in the contest :-)
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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LMAO - Now there's a change of perspective! (If the poem didn't make it clear you were a woman - and if I didn't know who uses rumpy-pumpy LOL - I would have guess this was written by a guy whose viagra just kicked in!)
Very cute entry - good luck in the contest :-)
Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2014
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Hi lorraine :) Thanks for your great feedback! This is a great prompt by the way, thanks for sponsoring something so fresh... kindest regards as always :)
Comment from Angel Debbie
This is so neat the way you paired these two poems together it is like they were written already and you only posted part before like a cliff hanger movie where they want you to come back next week to see what happens. Thanks for sharing, good luck with contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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This is so neat the way you paired these two poems together it is like they were written already and you only posted part before like a cliff hanger movie where they want you to come back next week to see what happens. Thanks for sharing, good luck with contest.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Hi Angel Debbie :) Thank you for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)
Comment from trevorletang
this is such a pleasant humorous poem. I love the change of mood and how her bloke manages to fit in rumpy pumpy for what ever mood. Great use of rhyme. you have done a really wonderful job on this one
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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this is such a pleasant humorous poem. I love the change of mood and how her bloke manages to fit in rumpy pumpy for what ever mood. Great use of rhyme. you have done a really wonderful job on this one
Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Hi Trevor :) Thank you so much for your great feedback. Glad you enjoyed this one! Kindest regards...:)
Comment from kiwijenny
Rumpy -pumpy......ha ha ha this makes sense as rumps are involved ...this is a good bookend poem as it does make everything better.........
Well done and humorously so.................
God bless
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Rumpy -pumpy......ha ha ha this makes sense as rumps are involved ...this is a good bookend poem as it does make everything better.........
Well done and humorously so.................
God bless
Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Thank you Kiwijenny for your great feedback. Glad you enjoyed this one! Kindest regards...:)
Comment from Petriesan
just playing here: a witch without warts would be ...Elizabeth Montgomery?
Does rumpy pumpy mean what I think it does? YEs, the notes say so. . .
clever piece here
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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just playing here: a witch without warts would be ...Elizabeth Montgomery?
Does rumpy pumpy mean what I think it does? YEs, the notes say so. . .
clever piece here
Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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LOL Petriesan! Thank you for your great feedback. Kindest regards...:)