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Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "a life in between"collection of poems and short stories
5 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Sometimes the best photos aren't the ones you expected. This shows the sneaky cat in the dark. The words seem to say the cat is always following its owner slyly or is it the camera's
owner following the cat to photograph the cat's personality for posterity.
Good illustration
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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Sometimes the best photos aren't the ones you expected. This shows the sneaky cat in the dark. The words seem to say the cat is always following its owner slyly or is it the camera's
owner following the cat to photograph the cat's personality for posterity.
Good illustration
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 10-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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I am a dog person, but when I saw the lighting on that cat, it was the perfect illustration. My dear friend, who is a fantastic photographer has his birthday and I wanted to make him smile, cheers judester
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It would be a good present for a cat lover. I like both cats and dogs. Though right now I own a dog.
dragonpoet
Comment from Moh Ana
Lovely way of saying that photos are stills that capture moments of life. We do "track [our] journey .. through wonderful photos", don't we? Thanks for tracking that thought in simple, meaningful words with wonderful rhyme too!
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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Lovely way of saying that photos are stills that capture moments of life. We do "track [our] journey .. through wonderful photos", don't we? Thanks for tracking that thought in simple, meaningful words with wonderful rhyme too!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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Thanks for the wonderful review, I hope that it makes friend smile for his birthday, cheers judester
Comment from emrpoems
solid abcb rhymes in your quatrains
Good transition of thoughts from one line to another.
Tried to choose a special verse but found that each had it own beauty of words and message
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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solid abcb rhymes in your quatrains
Good transition of thoughts from one line to another.
Tried to choose a special verse but found that each had it own beauty of words and message
Comment Written 10-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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Thanks for the wonderful review. I hope it makes my friend smile for his birthday, cheers judester
Comment from Nosha17
Memories are best recorded through photographs. You can look back and reflect on happy times and you have them forever. Enjoyable poem with good use of rhyming and language to express your thoughts. Faye
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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Memories are best recorded through photographs. You can look back and reflect on happy times and you have them forever. Enjoyable poem with good use of rhyming and language to express your thoughts. Faye
Comment Written 10-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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Thanks for the review, I hope it makes my friend smile for his birthday, cheers judester
Comment from kiwijenny
Even the sun
as it slowly descends,
seems to pause
as you switch lens.
This is great imagery...wonderful photo too...I like this poem a lot
God bless
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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Even the sun
as it slowly descends,
seems to pause
as you switch lens.
This is great imagery...wonderful photo too...I like this poem a lot
God bless
Comment Written 10-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2014
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Thanks for the review kiwijenny. It was fun to write, cheers judester