Aiona's Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Our Favorite Room"Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.
9 total reviews
Comment from lakeport
Our favorite room, Congratulation on your win. that's a beautiful expressed poem, very nice rhyming, I enjoyed reading it.God bless you,Lakeport.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Our favorite room, Congratulation on your win. that's a beautiful expressed poem, very nice rhyming, I enjoyed reading it.God bless you,Lakeport.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Thank you. :)
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your welcome,Lakeport.
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you're welcome.Lakeport.
Comment from victor 66
Hello. Congratulations on your win, you earned it. I entered this contest as well. I'm impressed with the number of votes and I also like it when the winner has a wide margin. You are obviously the winner. Perhaps we will cross paths again. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Hello. Congratulations on your win, you earned it. I entered this contest as well. I'm impressed with the number of votes and I also like it when the winner has a wide margin. You are obviously the winner. Perhaps we will cross paths again. Best wishes.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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I won????
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LOL! So I did... Thank you for the compliments.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Judy Couch
Very nice poem. I like the rhyme and the sentiments it expresses. Almost everyone can identify with an outdoor area where he can relax.
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Very nice poem. I like the rhyme and the sentiments it expresses. Almost everyone can identify with an outdoor area where he can relax.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Thank you. :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem uses all the required words in a reverse order and with descriptive story built in of the the interesting environment of the rain forest. Doesn't seemed forced to work. Nice job.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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This poem uses all the required words in a reverse order and with descriptive story built in of the the interesting environment of the rain forest. Doesn't seemed forced to work. Nice job.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Thank you. :)
Comment from rouskin
Very well written piece with vivid imagery Strong contender, probably the winner I wish you the best of luck in the contest Blessings, Rouskin
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Very well written piece with vivid imagery Strong contender, probably the winner I wish you the best of luck in the contest Blessings, Rouskin
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Thank you. :)
Comment from Delahay
Of the ones in the contest this is the best in my opinion. I really like the way you have portrayed the woods and the grass as your favorite room and all the wonderful things that can take place there. I am impress you can do this within the constraints of having to comply with the rules of this contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Of the ones in the contest this is the best in my opinion. I really like the way you have portrayed the woods and the grass as your favorite room and all the wonderful things that can take place there. I am impress you can do this within the constraints of having to comply with the rules of this contest.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
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Thank you. :)
Comment from Angel Debbie
By the sounds of it it's beautiful! Many descriptive words are used besides the contest ones. You did a great job incorporating all of them in this write. Good luck with contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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By the sounds of it it's beautiful! Many descriptive words are used besides the contest ones. You did a great job incorporating all of them in this write. Good luck with contest.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2014
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Thank you. :)
Comment from NurseBarb
Very cute poem about loving your back yard, especially the loo your dog loves best. Creative and a joy to read. Good luck in this contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Very cute poem about loving your back yard, especially the loo your dog loves best. Creative and a joy to read. Good luck in this contest.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Thank you!
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
You did an excellent job using the required words and transformed them into such a magical reading experience. This is simply a delightful read and I wish you all the best in the voting. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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You did an excellent job using the required words and transformed them into such a magical reading experience. This is simply a delightful read and I wish you all the best in the voting. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Thank you!
