Comment from rouskin

Excellent

aromas arise as the sun descends through smoke barbeque magic ... Magic indeed ...You've got my vote Best of luck in the contest
Blessings, Rouskin

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014

thank you rouskin :)

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

OMG What a spread this is...I love your poem...you can smell the food cooking here...so very well expressed...very well written...good luck in the contest...

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014

hehe thank you raven :-)

reply by l.raven on 04-Jun-2014

you are so very welcome...whens lunch time???..LOL..xxoo

Comment from NurseBarb

Excellent

You were able to be very descriptive in such a small amout of words. I can actually picture the griller watching the sunset while a delicious aroma fills the air. Well done.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014

thank you barb :-)

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

Well done, This is presented correctly and it fits the Food Fun category well. The picture is delicious looking. You've done a good job!

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014

thank you ryme :-)

Comment from Angel Debbie

Exceptional

Aromas arise
as the sun descends through smoke
barbeque magic

I believe you got this contest in the bag. The picture depicts the contest 100 % the words flow well and mean Summer time all the way. You have my vote!

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014

thank you angel :-)

Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER

Excellent

aromas arise Great alliterative intro
sun setting in clouds of smoke All those 's's
barbeque magic

Suggestion only. Good luck in the contest. Your name is mentioned in the contest rule page.

Regards:

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014

thank you stephen :)

Comment from Debra White

Excellent

Hi :) This is a lovely 5-7-5 poem given a nice flavour of haiku by incorporating the sun. I like the contrast of the bbq aromas rising as the sun descends. Nice alliteration in aromas/arise. Mouthwatering presentation! Good luck in the voting booth... kindest regards, Debra :)

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2014

thank you debra :)