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Comment from Delahay
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Any parent can relate to what you are saying here. They are so cute and peaceful when they are asleep that it is amazing how much chaos they can create any other time. It had to be difficult to say this in so few words.

 Comment Written 31-May-2014

reply by the author on 31-May-2014
    Thank you so much for your great feedback, I appreciate it. Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment from nelliesellie
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I love the picture. She is a cute child. Most children are angelic looking when asleep. I don' know why God blesses them with so much energy. I often wished I could bottle it. I would have made a fortune. Great work.

 Comment Written 30-May-2014

reply by the author on 31-May-2014
    Hi Ellie :) Thanks for your great feedback. She is cute yes.... most little demons are! Bottled energy.....? I would buy that for sure - I could do with a couple of shots of that myself! Kindest regards as always, Debra :)
Comment from marion
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Hi there
As I make my way through the entries of the 3/5/3 writing prompt competition, I have seen some good posts! Including this one - very original. I think it should do well. It's gorgeous and angelic - don't wake her! Marion.

 Comment Written 30-May-2014

reply by the author on 31-May-2014
    Hi Marion :) Thank you for your great feedback, I appreciate it! Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment from Waishali Deshmukh
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Everybody especially mother will agree with you. Babies do look angelic when they sleep.A very good piece accompaqnied by a nice pic.

 Comment Written 30-May-2014

reply by the author on 31-May-2014
    Thank you so much for your great feedback, I appreciate it! Kindest regards, Debra :)
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi,

Welcome to 'parenthood'!! Indeed, they are angels while they sleep.

Sometimes I think my youngest plotted in his sleep about how best to BEST Mom!! LOL.

Well done. Good luck in the contest.

Cheers,
Keep Smilin'... Jax

 Comment Written 30-May-2014

reply by the author on 31-May-2014
    Thank you Jax for your great feedback and good luck wishes. Kindest regards, Debra :)