The Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Collars, Pastors & Bus Drivers Pt 2"Subtitle: God Never Lets Go!
26 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Those are some of the reasons my mother never went to church. She would go into the woods and comune with God there. This was very interresting as it shows no one is immune from the devils plans
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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Those are some of the reasons my mother never went to church. She would go into the woods and comune with God there. This was very interresting as it shows no one is immune from the devils plans
Comment Written 28-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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Thanks Barb, appreciate your fine review.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Well written and interesting depiction of these events.
The note about British English was probably a good idea for many readers who would otherwise assume it was full of errors.
God always does provide a way as this older Pastor was given with the smaller church.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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Well written and interesting depiction of these events.
The note about British English was probably a good idea for many readers who would otherwise assume it was full of errors.
God always does provide a way as this older Pastor was given with the smaller church.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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Thanks mate. Had problems in here with "Up over" folks misunderstanding we "Down Under" folks so thought it a good idea. Cheers
Comment from foxangie123
There you are bringing us blessings and entertainment through your writing and witnessing. Please keep lifting us up because we need it and you are. Your an angel on earth with so much wisdom to offer.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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There you are bringing us blessings and entertainment through your writing and witnessing. Please keep lifting us up because we need it and you are. Your an angel on earth with so much wisdom to offer.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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Thanks friend. Had a review that pointed out my comma overload glad someone missed em hehe. This was an update to my autobiography that has been a long time getting finished.
Comment from michelleballentyne
Most of this was negative, which is both a good and bad thing. Good in the way as in creating a emotional connection with the reader. Bad in the way of it makes you sound like a half empty glass kind of guy. Either way, I love the flow of the story but your comma placement can be improved.
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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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Most of this was negative, which is both a good and bad thing. Good in the way as in creating a emotional connection with the reader. Bad in the way of it makes you sound like a half empty glass kind of guy. Either way, I love the flow of the story but your comma placement can be improved.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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OK well thanks, I think. If I fix the commas will you come back and do something about the awful rating?
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Yes, once you live up to your word, I'll consider a better rating.
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Thanks appreciated I started but need to go for a bit. Let you know when it is ready later.
Comment from Selina Stambi
The body of Christ is far from being the pure spotless Bride she's supposed to be, that's for sure!
Your struggles with your church echo so loudly within me as I smile and nod my head, Geoff.
Glad most of the situations have been attended to and resolved.
Have a great week, friend.
Sonali
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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The body of Christ is far from being the pure spotless Bride she's supposed to be, that's for sure!
Your struggles with your church echo so loudly within me as I smile and nod my head, Geoff.
Glad most of the situations have been attended to and resolved.
Have a great week, friend.
Sonali
Comment Written 02-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2014
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thanks Sis been seeing you or Hubby on Skype but I know if you wanted to talk on there you would let me know beforehand. Are you o East or West coast of Canada right? Thanks for the great review.
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So glad we connected. I'm in Toronto, Ontario.
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Hi there sorry the accent was a bit difficult and bit hard lip reading you accross the line hehe! Louise and I are both lip readers. If you are ok with it when you come over maybe we can have a cuppa down at the local store or even in between Baulkham Hills and here some place if you prefer. I started to tell you Baulkham Hills is on the Eastern side of Blacktown the city next East to ours.
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No problem - different accents get a bit disconcerting the first time. I'm sure it'll be easier the next time.
Glad we connected.
I'll let you know when we finalize our plans. I hope I'll be able to make it for that cuppa - will do my best, I promise. :)
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Just sent you a note about another addition to Chapter 23 of my Biography something we (me and the boss)were talking about yesterday and I knew I had to add it
Comment from GracieAnn
Sankey, this is a well written personal journey in the form of a journal, in some ways. It is realistic and does not try to soft-soap the things in our lives of which we must contend even as Christians. Well done. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 30-May-2014
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Sankey, this is a well written personal journey in the form of a journal, in some ways. It is realistic and does not try to soft-soap the things in our lives of which we must contend even as Christians. Well done. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 30-May-2014
reply by the author on 30-May-2014
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Thanks Sis for getting on board I do appreciate your lovely review. Hope you get time to look thr9ough the other chapters. I just added to this one today from some helps from other reviewers. Lord Bless
Comment from GWinterwin
This is a good letter, you really get the point across. I can relate to some of your problems there. It just seems the younger generation, do not think like we do.
reply by the author on 29-May-2014
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This is a good letter, you really get the point across. I can relate to some of your problems there. It just seems the younger generation, do not think like we do.
Comment Written 29-May-2014
reply by the author on 29-May-2014
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AMEn Bro how true. Thanks for the great review. Lots of letters in there some did get sent some just stayed on my system hehe.
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Hi Bro been a long time since you came threougfh here. Just wanted to tell you the chapter got re-done and has been added to a few times if you want to look again.
Comment from Norbanus
Anyone who is interested in your story will appreciate the fact that you covered as much ground as you did. If you divide it into smaller segments it will lose some of its continuity, for those who want to read it.
reply by the author on 28-May-2014
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Anyone who is interested in your story will appreciate the fact that you covered as much ground as you did. If you divide it into smaller segments it will lose some of its continuity, for those who want to read it.
Comment Written 28-May-2014
reply by the author on 28-May-2014
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AMEn Bro thanks for the great review. Much appreciated. Have had some good suggestions to consider to add so I will think about it and let you all know.
Comment from mermaids
Your mention of your brother the fruit picker-recluse had me laughing. As a person who attends church,I cna relate to some of the things you describe. This is an essay that gives the reader a view into your church life.
reply by the author on 28-May-2014
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Your mention of your brother the fruit picker-recluse had me laughing. As a person who attends church,I cna relate to some of the things you describe. This is an essay that gives the reader a view into your church life.
Comment Written 28-May-2014
reply by the author on 28-May-2014
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hey new friend thanks very much for the great review. Yeah he used to grow stuff in his garden at the bottom of their property and sell at the markets...then it was not working out so he just stuck to reading and reading and studying...as I said 'Professional student" The fruit picking came a lot later.Will look around for your stuff not sure I have read any of yours yet. IK recommend going back to the beginning and working through only if you care to ok! Thanks again.
Comment from michaelcahill
You really can't cut anything as it is all a part of the thought process and necessary. I read so much in there that I have wanted to say over the years to various congregations that I have been in. It points up an underlying problem that most congregations have, there are a bunch of humans in them! I got lucky here with a little church of old folks that seem to accept everyone. It only took sixty years. By the way I thought I'd let you know that gal we were all praying for (Honeycomb) came home from the hospital and is on the road to recovery. Prayers answered!! Great chapter here. mikey
reply by the author on 28-May-2014
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You really can't cut anything as it is all a part of the thought process and necessary. I read so much in there that I have wanted to say over the years to various congregations that I have been in. It points up an underlying problem that most congregations have, there are a bunch of humans in them! I got lucky here with a little church of old folks that seem to accept everyone. It only took sixty years. By the way I thought I'd let you know that gal we were all praying for (Honeycomb) came home from the hospital and is on the road to recovery. Prayers answered!! Great chapter here. mikey
Comment Written 28-May-2014
reply by the author on 28-May-2014
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Thanks mate. have deci8dede to sell the piano have a look at my Time line on Face Book. I can't hear it properly anymore and as much as I am very sentimental about it I think you understand...it would give us more space in our lounge room and I couldn't resist the great valuation the tuner gave us for it. I appreciate your very sympathetic review my friend. God Bless.
