Comment from JavaJunkie

Excellent

Well you have definitely succeeded in making me want a peanut butter sandwich! Those of great rhymes like stench and clenched.
-the two PB's feels redundant here: I think I'll make a PB and PB sandwich for me
I love the line peanut butter powers.

 Comment Written 23-May-2014

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reply by the author on 24-May-2014

Ah there is a reason for the PB and PB sandwich. When you make a PB and J sandwich you have PB on one slice and J on the other. I wanted the reader to know that there was PB on both slices and they were slammed together to make a PB and PB sandwich!

Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

I love the picture. I love the poem. I had a chuckle out tot the last line. The poem was about eating nuts and ended with you are what you eat. You called yourself a nut and probably had a mile on your face when you wrote that line. Great work.

 Comment Written 23-May-2014

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reply by the author on 23-May-2014

Thanks it was fun

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

An interesting poem about a peanut butter sandwich, A good one for the contest. Creative imagination put in to it.

Munch, munch mmm, mmm, blah, blah, munch, woow
Peanut butter words from this man's own wazoo
I'm greatly indebted to this fine tasty treat
'Cause now I have peanut butter powers that cannot be beat

Remember, you are what you eat!


Good luck in the contest Mary

 Comment Written 22-May-2014

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reply by the author on 22-May-2014

Thanks was fun to write

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

I love the teeth/thief proximate rhyme
good alliteration in tasty treat - I also love the eating sounds LOL
Wonderfully clever and amusing - a terrific tribute to the peanut butter sandwich sans jelly LOL Brooke

 Comment Written 22-May-2014

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reply by the author on 22-May-2014

Thanks. I think I'll go make a sandwich