Look beyond
A plea.19 total reviews
Comment from donette1914
wow there is so many talented people and you are one i love this piece you may be handicapped but wholehearted outstanding it was a pleasure
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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wow there is so many talented people and you are one i love this piece you may be handicapped but wholehearted outstanding it was a pleasure
Comment Written 22-May-2014
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Thank you ,very much
Comment from mfowler
Bravo! This is a real poem with a real message of tolerance and acceptance. The handicapped man protests his true nature over stereotypes about his disability. Good tight and respectful writing!
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Bravo! This is a real poem with a real message of tolerance and acceptance. The handicapped man protests his true nature over stereotypes about his disability. Good tight and respectful writing!
Comment Written 22-May-2014
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Thank you very much .
Comment from royowen
I like this small poetic entry in this six word poem competition. The artwork is great, the six word poem is a little ambiguous you've managed to get maximum value from this poem. Good luck! Blessings, Roy,
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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I like this small poetic entry in this six word poem competition. The artwork is great, the six word poem is a little ambiguous you've managed to get maximum value from this poem. Good luck! Blessings, Roy,
Comment Written 22-May-2014
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Thank you very much.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this six word poem about the broken bodies that still contain a loving heart. i enjoyed reading it. such truth. good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this six word poem about the broken bodies that still contain a loving heart. i enjoyed reading it. such truth. good luck in the contest
Comment Written 22-May-2014
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Thank you very much, for your beautiful comments.
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the poem. We are all handicapped in a way. We tend to not look beyond today. We do not see the changes that are possible. If we are sad, we expect to be sad with the rising sun. If we are happy we feel betrayed when the net sunrise brings sadness. Great work.
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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I love the poem. We are all handicapped in a way. We tend to not look beyond today. We do not see the changes that are possible. If we are sad, we expect to be sad with the rising sun. If we are happy we feel betrayed when the net sunrise brings sadness. Great work.
Comment Written 22-May-2014
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Thank you very much for your beautiful review.
Comment from Charlene0513
One person that lacks the capability to enjoy life never takes anything for granted but rather relishes in and towards the future with an open heart.
Charlene
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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One person that lacks the capability to enjoy life never takes anything for granted but rather relishes in and towards the future with an open heart.
Charlene
Comment Written 21-May-2014
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Thank you very much for reviewing.
Comment from JuneYvonne
Clever use of words and a very meaningful sentiment in this 6-word poem. It is not easy to convey so much in so little, but you have nailed it. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Clever use of words and a very meaningful sentiment in this 6-word poem. It is not easy to convey so much in so little, but you have nailed it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-May-2014
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
your six words say a lot
yes don't look at the handicap
look inside my heart to find the real me
cheers..Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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good luck in the contest
your six words say a lot
yes don't look at the handicap
look inside my heart to find the real me
cheers..Smoothiecool
Comment Written 21-May-2014
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Thank you very much.
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welcome..SC
Comment from Jumbo J
HI...
these six words echoed across the landscape... a very wonderful message to go beyond the flesh and see the heart... to me, being handicapped means a strong determination to move forward which is not a handicap at all... just a lot of heart.
All the very best in this contest!
With our thoughts we create,
a clear vision,
James xx
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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HI...
these six words echoed across the landscape... a very wonderful message to go beyond the flesh and see the heart... to me, being handicapped means a strong determination to move forward which is not a handicap at all... just a lot of heart.
All the very best in this contest!
With our thoughts we create,
a clear vision,
James xx
Comment Written 21-May-2014
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Thank you very much for your beautiful words.
Comment from Dean Kuch
This says a great deal, without a lot of description. It really isn't necessary...the descriptions, I mean...
If we have our eyesight and health, in general, but can't walk, are we not far better off than those who can't see, but walk in perpetual darkness, oblivious to the beauty all around them?
Of all the things one could lose, my eyesight and mind would be the most devastating to me.
Well done...
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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This says a great deal, without a lot of description. It really isn't necessary...the descriptions, I mean...
If we have our eyesight and health, in general, but can't walk, are we not far better off than those who can't see, but walk in perpetual darkness, oblivious to the beauty all around them?
Of all the things one could lose, my eyesight and mind would be the most devastating to me.
Well done...
Comment Written 21-May-2014
reply by the author on 23-May-2014
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Thank you very much for your beautiful review. yes eyesight and mind would be the most devastating to me .hopefully fanstory would save us from the second!
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Hah, you're very welcome, Sanku...