The Crypt of Hubbard Hayle:Part 3
A continuation of the saga of Danny & Timmy...41 total reviews
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Can't believe he was dumb/inconsiderate enough to call his friend Lard Ass. I'd have beat him up too.
love the old Dim Witty... great name.. and sausage fingers sounds just about right.
I like how she "vanished a bit too soon"... nicely put.
Why the hell don't they go home? What gets into boys' heads anyway? Well, they're askin for it.
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reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Can't believe he was dumb/inconsiderate enough to call his friend Lard Ass. I'd have beat him up too.
love the old Dim Witty... great name.. and sausage fingers sounds just about right.
I like how she "vanished a bit too soon"... nicely put.
Why the hell don't they go home? What gets into boys' heads anyway? Well, they're askin for it.
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Comment Written 19-May-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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They're too darn stubborn, Phyllis, and besides...they're boys. need I say more?
