Comment from 9999pool

Excellent

A great nature poem outlining the beauty of spring in vibrant colors before us. The little animals and birds are in sheer delight too.
The early morning spring air freshens our nostril as we breath in the beauty of the surroundings.
A wonderful feeling that spring has brought to us in the season of growth and regeneration.
Great write and well penned. Good luck.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

---

reply by the author on 28-May-2014

Thanks for a great review zanya

reply by 9999pool on 28-May-2014

Welcome, Zanya.
Cheerio, Ritchie. ;))

Comment from Jean Lutz

Excellent

Thank you for capturing spring at it's finest. I am blessed even in my old age to be able to explore the wonders with little children. I learn so much from them.

 Comment Written 21-May-2014

---

reply by the author on 28-May-2014

Thanks for reviewing zanya

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi Zanya,

These acrostics look to be most challenging. I've never attempted one, but I just may have to!

Nice descriptive poem for to rejoice in Spring & God.

Well done.

Cheers,
Keep Smilin'... Jax

 Comment Written 20-May-2014

---

reply by the author on 21-May-2014

Thanks for reviewing - zanya

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Spring's halycon days are here
Purple bluish violets appear
Raucous crows caw and chant
Insects buzz and hum and consort
Noisy mowers rent the Nocturne
Well done ...halcyon days ....
God bless

 Comment Written 19-May-2014

---

reply by the author on 21-May-2014

Thanks for reviewing zanya

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

i love spring time when everything seems to come to life and all the flowers bloom and bugs come out, birds fly well done it was a pleasure to read

 Comment Written 18-May-2014

---

reply by the author on 21-May-2014

Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

lovely illustration for your solid acrostic for Springtime
good use of occasional rhyme
vivid detail of setting that appeals to more senses than just the visual
good internal rhyme in cheep and peep
what a lovely celebration of spring :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 18-May-2014

---

reply by the author on 21-May-2014

Thanks for a great review zanya

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

This is well done. The images you have used in this free verse poem are very vivid and descriptive. You have portrayed Spring well here.

 Comment Written 18-May-2014

---

reply by the author on 18-May-2014

Thanks indeed for an encouraging review zanya

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Springtime trumps Winter and bring forth life and beauty. This is a well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an exciting read. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 18-May-2014

---

reply by the author on 18-May-2014

I am delighted with this review zanya

reply by c_lucas on 18-May-2014

You're welcome, Zanya. Charlie

Comment from yolieday

Excellent

I love the word usage in this piece. It really expresses the features of spring. I like the picture because it ties it all in. Lovely poem. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-May-2014

---

reply by the author on 18-May-2014

Thank you for an encouraging review zanya