Spring
Spring brings anticipation for warm weather fun.16 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Hi. I saw that you reviewed Debi Pick Marquette as Dr. Suess poem and thought you might be a newbie!
Looks like you have been here for years...with breaks in between?
I came in 2007, so I get it.
Anyway...this one looked interesting as I'm so anxious for spring!
It's going to be in the fifties here in Western Ma. for the next few days so hope springs eternal with your ode to spring!
Welcome.... Back?
Karenina
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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Hi. I saw that you reviewed Debi Pick Marquette as Dr. Suess poem and thought you might be a newbie!
Looks like you have been here for years...with breaks in between?
I came in 2007, so I get it.
Anyway...this one looked interesting as I'm so anxious for spring!
It's going to be in the fifties here in Western Ma. for the next few days so hope springs eternal with your ode to spring!
Welcome.... Back?
Karenina
Comment Written 26-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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Oh, thank you truly! Spring is surely my most favorite season! I am also in Massachusetts. Plainville. I have written my whole life and believe that I am quite blessed by having the ability to express my thoughts, ideas and creativity with words. Sadly, not everybody has strengthened this born gift of "Communication" to the best of their ability, and as crazy as this seams, my Fan Story friends from around the world know who I am on a deeper level than family and daily friends in my life. Hurrah for Spring! Thank you! xo
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It's funny how we find writers we "vibe" with. If not for Debi's poem I wouldn't have found you. Did I fan you? Hmmm. I have to go check. If not, I will! I know Plainville! We're 40 miles away from one another!
Comment from rouskin
Once spring arrives, summer seems to peek in. The beauty of seasons revolve in a spin Looks like a winner to me Best of luck in the contest
Blessings, Rouskin
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Once spring arrives, summer seems to peek in. The beauty of seasons revolve in a spin Looks like a winner to me Best of luck in the contest
Blessings, Rouskin
Comment Written 19-May-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Thank you so much for your positive review. I'm glad you enjoyed this. sue
Comment from MagKing
You've really analyzed the attributes and fun of spring here, with a rich welcoming set of rhymes...But the syllable count isn't perfect.
But don't get me wrong, you did very well, only that would have made it exceptional...
Good luck in the contest!
MagKing
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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You've really analyzed the attributes and fun of spring here, with a rich welcoming set of rhymes...But the syllable count isn't perfect.
But don't get me wrong, you did very well, only that would have made it exceptional...
Good luck in the contest!
MagKing
Comment Written 19-May-2014
reply by the author on 19-May-2014
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Thank you for your review. I hope rather than analyzing future writings,you focus more on feeling the authors thoughts that they are expressing and not be so concerned with grammatical "perfection". Just my opinion, but thank you for the kind words and great review. : )
Comment from seaglass
Everything anyone can think of regarding spring is included in this poem of rhyming couplets. The last line closes it nicely, "The beauty of seasons revolve in a spin." wouldn't it be sad if there were no seasons revolving.
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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Everything anyone can think of regarding spring is included in this poem of rhyming couplets. The last line closes it nicely, "The beauty of seasons revolve in a spin." wouldn't it be sad if there were no seasons revolving.
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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This is true, thank you for this nice review. I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Spring is just such a beautiful time of year. New life, new love. Every season is glorious, and I am blessed to be able to be showered with the effects of all 4, but, Spring is definately #1 on my list! Thank you for the kind words!
Comment from a.w.brooks
Spring is so true with all the new growth and all the new babies growing. Love the poem thanks for writing it have a great and wonderful day. The words flow like I believe they should and it touched me thanks again
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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Spring is so true with all the new growth and all the new babies growing. Love the poem thanks for writing it have a great and wonderful day. The words flow like I believe they should and it touched me thanks again
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind words and it makes me happy to know that my thoughts can transfer to another mind, just with a pen and a piece of paper, or a computer..lol. Happy day to you!
Comment from royowen
A beautiful bright, breezy poem praising spring! Nice rhyming couplets woven into a nicely rounded write, with all new plants, the food, and all the good things that herald the coming of spring, nicely written poem, good luck in the competition! Blessings Roy.
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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A beautiful bright, breezy poem praising spring! Nice rhyming couplets woven into a nicely rounded write, with all new plants, the food, and all the good things that herald the coming of spring, nicely written poem, good luck in the competition! Blessings Roy.
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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Thank you for the kind review. I love writing so as to include my readers in a clear visual "shadow" of my own thoughts. Once again, many thanks!
Comment from Nosha17
Very nice imagery of your concept of Spring. It is a lovely season. Your choice of words was good and it had a smooth flow. Good luck in the contest. Faye
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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Very nice imagery of your concept of Spring. It is a lovely season. Your choice of words was good and it had a smooth flow. Good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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I'm glad you enjoyed my words. The Northeast, U.S. leaves most of us in utter anticipation of those baby days of a new Spring!
Comment from Ben Colder
mine too, the touch of life. Amazing, the seasons and the creator's mind. What an awesome God. Beautiful poem. I shall vote for it. Shalom.
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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mine too, the touch of life. Amazing, the seasons and the creator's mind. What an awesome God. Beautiful poem. I shall vote for it. Shalom.
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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Oh, thank you for feeling the love I so do for this beautiful season. All of our seasons are magnificent, but the newness of life that Spring showers us with, is where it all begins. Blessings!
Comment from RYME4U
This is well done. You have made little vignettes for each scene you portray. The rhyme is good and the rhythm is smooth.
Great job!
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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This is well done. You have made little vignettes for each scene you portray. The rhyme is good and the rhythm is smooth.
Great job!
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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Oh, thank you. It's funny, I write to satisfy my own self. It is just so uplifting that I have the ability to transpose my vivid thoughts, into words, on paper, so a reader can read them, and my thoughts are instantly cloned.. so cool....thank you : )
Comment from zanya
So uplifting and hopeful following the dark days of the long and grey winter - new and fresh and wonderful'Smell the sweetness of the morning dew'.
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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So uplifting and hopeful following the dark days of the long and grey winter - new and fresh and wonderful'Smell the sweetness of the morning dew'.
Comment Written 18-May-2014
reply by the author on 18-May-2014
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Oh, my goodness. Yes, by me just reading your review, I can smell that sweetness of the morning dew. Every "magnificently created" day of Winter, (lol) helps me to smell all of those glorious Spring smells, as if they were bottled up with me inside. Thank you for your kind words and I am truly appreciative that it sparkled your reading enjoyment.
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